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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Silhouette

    Hi slubbs here with a review:D First of all, dayummmm I loved this deep poem! Every word you used was meaningful, it all built up the poem perfectly. I like ...

    Jun 16, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Love Yourself: A Poem

    Hi slubbs here with a short review! :D I liked this poem a lot! It was super meaningful, you captured the concept perfectly and explained the beauty life has to ...

    Jun 15, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Breaking Up With Imaginary You

    Slubbs here with a review :D I loved this so much! It was absolutely smashing! The flow was perfect, I didn’t stumble at all. This was such a capturing poem, ...

    Jun 14, 2021
  • Short Story » General, Teen Fiction Re: I'm Not Planning On Finishing This Because My Attention Span Is Bad

    Hello slubbs with a review :D I found it to be a captivating introduction. I like how you set the narrator in their teenage years and explained the cold setting. ...

    Jun 13, 2021
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Cafe

    Slubbs here with a review :D This was a fascinating piece! It was so elegant and dreamy word by word. You painted a picture in my eyes. The only thing ...

    Jun 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Suicide

    Slubbs here with a small review. This poem is deep! I like it, it’s so heavy and meaningful. You truly captured the consequences of one who takes their life away. ...

    Jun 11, 2021
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: Disappointment

    Slubbs here with a short review. This was absolutely fantastic, it was so creative and incredibly detailed! You created something that the reader can’t stop reading, you won’t be able ...

    Jun 10, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Literature Re: The Reality of our Memorys

    Hello, slubbs here to review your fantastic work. Let’s dive into it. This was a very unique story. I’m going to go through the rough patches first. So I agree ...

    Jun 9, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Assassin

    Hi slubbs here with a review! This was a neat short story. I like the concept of the wife hiring him to kill. :D Anyhow let’s jump into the juicy ...

    Jun 7, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Why do we love a place?

    Hi slubbs here with a review:D I liked this poem a lot it was an interesting concept. The wording had a really nice flow, that’s hard to do without rhyming ...

    Jun 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: An Ode to YWS but with Laundry Detergent

    Slubbs here with a review. I absolutely loved this I don’t have a poor thing to say about it. You put so much creativity in your works it brings a ...

    Jun 6, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Forever, And Ever

    Hi slubbs here with a review. I really liked this poem! Your word choices were fabulous, “Tangling around my torso, Like vines.” This is such a good simile! You can ...

    Jun 5, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Do You Remember?

    Slubbs here with a review. This poem was incredibly relatable! I’ve become slightly more distant from my friends because of the pandemic. The beginning of the poem was good. I ...

    Jun 3, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Immortality

    Hi, slubbs here with a short review. I loved this it made me think of immorality in another way. “But what people fail to realize is you would never have ...

    Jun 3, 2021
  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: Sister, Sister

    Hello I loved this short story 10/10! The beginning was amazing, it made the reader want to keep reading as you built up detail in your writing. Your choice of ...

    Jun 1, 2021


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