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Re: Rock bottom to Almighty
hi Ka67. i am siya. wow just wow. That's all i have to say for this piece that you have written.The first half is all about the devoted love a ...
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Re: cold feet + guests
Hi pompadour. It is Siya here for review time. Honestly speaking, this poem was really good. I loved the way you have used double meanings to indicate things like- "you ...
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Re: Mommy! Mommy! Look!
Hi siya here for review time. You have written quite a sweet poem it is short and simple and just the way i like it. Good job. This poem give ...
Mar 19, 2015 -
Re: I flow on as I sing this song
hi Siya here for review tiime. So i generally like your poem it't descriptive and not that long to so you dont have to have the stress of reading such ...
Mar 14, 2015 -
Re: And what was I thinking
Hi Rachell. Siya here to write a new review. So i would start out by telling you that i really liked your title, it kind of random and yet it ...
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Re: The Box of Time - filled with lies
Hi Sophie. Siya here. So i guess i liked your poem it's sweet and short(not that sweet. huh?). I would like to point out somethings to you. Like you have ...
Feb 14, 2015 -
Re: Nostalgia
Hi alfonso. I liked your poem in general. I also like the name you chose for this poem. I really rhink that the way you have described the situation is ...
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Re: Make Me Alive: a Sonnet
HeThe flowers at my window breathe again. You feel like taking a breath of fresh airThe flowers at my window breat You feel like taking a breath of fresh airy ...
Jan 31, 2015 -
Re: Hurtful Things
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Re: Cells
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Jan 16, 2015
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Re: Paper in the Wind
Hi, I am siya.Wow! I have to say amazing poem. It put the point across very well. I could not agree with you more. 'we're all just pieces of paper, ...
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Re: Sorry Doesn't Cut It
hi Arkhaion. i am Siya. Honestly i really like your poem it is very intriguing. it gives you the facts of life. I really liked the title you chose for ...
Jan 14, 2015 -
Re: Beef Noodles
Hi it is siya here. I generally liked this poem. But if i were tou i woul make the main concept of the poem clearer. I liked the way you ...
Jan 4, 2015 -
Re: Gaia
I have one word for this poem 'amazing'. I really liked your poem it is short and sweet (except for the fact that it is not exactly a happy topic). ...
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Re: Rosa and Ginger
In general i liled this poem a lot. The rhyming scheme was good. And it gave the reader pleasure while reading. The thing that i did not understand was - ...
Dec 31, 2014
