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Re: River
the way u compared ur little brther to a river deserves appreciation. actually childhood is river. it passes fast as a liver and can pass through aLL ROCKS OR PROBLEMS ...
Jun 5, 2015 -
Re: the Edge of love
the whole poem is a fab. he ending is actually a truth that is everyone has to wait for true luv that too so true as to die with him ...
Jun 5, 2015 -
Re: My Favorite Time of Year
its a good poem for all the chidren. i luv the way u described the poem i am a indian and so we dont get to see the beautiful winter ...
Jun 5, 2015 -
Re: Last Poem
i love this poem and i am ur freind ,so i ask u not tostop wriing leave that inhuman wrecth to his state and u should not waste ur talent ...
Jun 3, 2015 -
Re: Bonds
i really like his poem it is short and in this short words u have shown how good a poet r u. bonds r truly important in our life and ...
Jun 3, 2015 -
Re: Colorblind
i agree with the theme of ur poem all of us are truly a colorblind in our busy schedule we often slip out to see the variant colors nature holds ...
Jun 2, 2015 -
Re: Mirror, Mirror
i like the poem . i think it has beautifully brought the conflict inside a man with his outer looks and internalqualities. mirror had played a very important role in ...
Jun 1, 2015 -
Re: Woodpecker
the poem is good .i love the way you expressed the body of the wood pecker. the constant ticking is describeb as a music. the painting was what i dont ...
Jun 1, 2015 -
Re: Slave Girl
the ending i cant understand. however he mid portion i truly liked .the way to explained that u r under the blazing sun people yell at u and make u ...
Jun 1, 2015 -
Re: A Broken Friendship
ausome poem. i like the feeling i have recently parted fom my freind. not really parted but virtually as they have changed their schools. the poem is so good.the way ...
Jun 1, 2015 -
Re: He'll be Back
this poem can be said as a biography of a woman who is imprison her hands are tied this back is aching.she is telling that her loose hairs are the ...
May 27, 2015 -
Re: Leaving Home
this is a poem arising out of thie ills of the western culture. in our country this strategy is not practiced and after reading ur poem i really feel myshelf ...
May 27, 2015 -
Re: Locked
i think this poem has a emotional value where a man does not want that any1 can access his heart or soul but his own heart so locked and protected ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: That So Called Friends
this poem is a goodone and hols the current age of freindship which is no longer based on the ground of trust but on shelfish needs. Truly when this is ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: Hate/Love
this poem as per my knowledge of love is one where you are deep in love with a person and she is also the one wqhom u hate the most. ...
May 25, 2015
