Bonds

Oh no!!
My eyes were wounded when I read this. I couldn't do this great poem even I tried it. It's so hard to write a short and simple poem but so meaningful. Anyway there was a mistake. At the last stanza and line.

[Loving for eternity]

You should put the dot..........after the last word you know.

xD Not that's matters, though..
Keep up and I hope I helped.

i really like his poem it is short and in this short words u have shown how good a poet r u. bonds r truly important in our life and here every man is actually thirsty for love from other and this is for all kinds of man irespective of good or bad. even a terrorist or a wrecked man
strives to get love from society. a shelfish man is al;so thirsty for love. your poem is applicable everywhere. welcome to yws. ur first poem published is very good. keep writing.

Hey!

I really like how short, simple, and to the point this poem is. I am a big fan of writing poetry myself, and I sometimes find myself writ in long, drawn out things that don't always work. Yours is short and sweet, and I like that. I also really like the repetition at the end of the stanzas, I think it gives emphasis to your words and works well.

My only possible pointer is to maybe explain what you mean by "we" better. In the title you say it is about bonds, but I feel like the actual poem can be interpreted many different ways. That ,ay be what you were going for, however, and if so you did an excellent job!

All in all, definitely write more, you did a great job! Have a good day:)