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Hi, runawaylove here to review your poem! :) This is relatable and a poem that seems to e coming straight from the heart. I am a fan of poems that ...

Hey, runawaylove here to review your poem! :) First of all what I loved was the usage of "mommy" at the beginning. It gives the whole poem the point of ...

Hey, runawaylove here to review your poem and a warm, warm welcome to YWS! :) So first of all, like the previous reviewer said, this poem is sincere and it ...

Hey! runawaylove here to review your work. :) First off, a warm warm welcome to YWS! This is a great community for writers where you can learn and improve your ...

Hey! runawaylove here to review your poem! That was a really good pice. The word plays were remarkable and the rhymes were simple and smooth. I personally enjoy reading a ...

Hey! runawaylove here to review your piece! Okayyy, so that was one intense piece of writing. I loved all the descriptions, the narration was perfect and the imagery was beyond ...

Hey, runawaylove here to review your poem! First off, the whole piece is written beautifully. The narrative is perfect. The way you incorporated the feelings of the boy and the ...

Hey, runawaylove here to review your poem! First of all, I love this poem. Okay? Okay. Don't you ever say it sucks. This poem is intimate on a very personal ...

Hey, runawaylove here to review you poem! First off, I like the title. The theme is nice. This poem has a simple yet elegant rhyme scheme and I love poems ...

Hey, runawaylove here to review and "tear this thing apart"! (Lol just joking :) ) First of all, writer's block is something all writers fear. Some time ago I went ...

Hey, runawaylove here to review you poem! First of all this poem is A-D-O-R-A-B-L-E! It reminds me of my teddy bear that I used to keep with me all the ...

Hey! Runawaylove here to review your poem. First of all this is a very catchy piece of writing. The flow of the poem is this beautiful especially because this poem ...

Hey, runawaylove here to review your poem. So first of all this poem in one word in well-written. It has the child's innocence and the tone is just perfect. I ...

Hey, Runawaylove here to review your poem! Okay, you have a very thoughtful and motivational poem here. The idea is very good but the poem could be better. First of ...

Hey, Runawaylove here to review! :) First of all, you need to work on the title. Something more catchy or something that speaks of adventure would do. Another thing is ...