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Hey! Am here to review this piece. "If no one will listen If no one will hear If no one will answer We will wait here We'll stay with pain ...

Wow!! I loved this poem. Something so amazing that the whole world needs to see. Your meant to be a writer. Lemme clear this up for you in a few ...

Hey! Am finally here to review this amazing piece you have written. First of all lemme congratulate you on writing such a wonderful piece. Now lemme correct your mistakes The ...

A long poem. Water? A nice topic to write about. A lot of stuff comes in mind doesn't it? Well I think you need to add commas fullstops to give ...

Hey there. Am here to review this piece at last! I liked your title and I like your little brain there for choosing this title to write a poem on. ...

Great Title and a great poem. It is a simple and a easy poem . Easy for people to understand. You started off saying that at first the mind is ...

I think it would be better if you would add fullstops, comma's or semi colons. That makes the poem look more better. "Its raining on yard Its raining on my ...

Hey SpaceSoldier. Nice Name! :) Is this really poetry? I mean It looks like a paragraph. Try dividing the stanza's to make it look better. Cause by looking at it ...

Hey there. A simple and kiddish poem I felt after reading. In the first lines "I want to go to the forest talking to plants and animals lying on the ...

Hmmm Since I have not read the other chapters I might get confused with this chapter. So I'll just point out the errors. The character Fiera had some things which ...

Really loved the theme of the poem and when I said Really It meant REALLY LOVED IT. A short and a sweet poem. Just 9 lines and conveys such an ...

Lemme start reviewing :_ The line "I am this filthy skin thing" seemed a bit odd. Try changing that. I think there should be a full stop after this line ...

I really liked the poem though there are a few errors here and there. Not major mistakes just minor and this was the best of all your I have read. ...

Okay , lemme go one by one on reviewing this amazing piece you have written. I almost start correcting the mistakes and then end my review with the lines I ...

Hey! I have been taking a long break from studies. Was bored and decided to review something. So lemme start reviewing your remarkable piece. I mostly start with the negative ...