It Raining

I think it would be better if you would add fullstops, comma's or semi colons. That makes the poem look more better.
"Its raining on yard

Its raining on my heart

The siler drops of rain

Is droping like pearl

To my soul"

Should be :-

"Its raining on yard.

Its raining on my heart.

The siler drops of rain,

Is droping like pearl

To my soul."

And in this line "The siler drops of rain,"
Is it siler or should it be silver? Cuz there is no such word as siler.

Hi Ahmed,here is Dark to give review on your poem!

First of all,I like your piece of imaginary here.And the simile 'dropping like a pearl',seems like you mis typo the 'droping' here^^.But I still love the idea here.

At the end here:

# Is droping like pearl

To my soul-->It doesn't look right there.
Anyway,it is a nice poem to read and I enjoyed with your poem here!Keep it up
Cheers
~Dark

Apart from the spelling mistakes in it, this is actually a nice poem. Below I have corrected the spelling mistakes and applied a few retouches just to give you a feel how this could've been more profound. Please remember that I'm not 'changing' your poem, just suggesting

It's Raining
It's raining in the yard
It's raining on my heart
The silver drops of rain
are falling like pearls
on my soul

Hey,
Alright, so I'll start off by saying that I'm not trying to be mean. I'm just pointing out a few things that seem to be lacking in your poem. Your poem isn't bad but it's rather short. It ends the moment the reader tries to get the feel of what you're trying to express. When you're talking about the rain, a lot of emotions can be expressed.
It needs a little work and other than a small typo in the 3rd para I think it's a good poem. But it could use some rework.

Good Luck!

Anouk

Hi! Okay so... This is a review. Here we go.

This poem is very short and simple. That's not an issue, many great poems can be just like that. However, this poem could use some work. I don't want to sound mean or too critical, I'm just trying to give you some helpful advice.
I'll start with the first line.

Its raining on yard.

Unless 'yard' is a person's name, it should say 'the yard'.

That is just one example of what can be fixed within this poem. It needs quite a bit of work. I Suggest taking the time to go through each line and try to think of new ways to say what you want, and also just to fix baby grammar errors like the one I mentioned above.

Good luck! Happy writing.

Malachi here to review.

The third line should be silent, rather than "siler", that's just a small typo that can be easily fixed. Also, Is at the beginning of the fourth line should be are, because there are drops of rain, not a drop, making it plural. So to say the drops of rain is, is incorrect.

For me this poem was short and not to interesting, but i believe there lots of people on here who would thoroughly enjoy it, so don't let me discourage you. Sorry if i sounded harsh.
Keep it up!