neptune

Hey @WhosabellCanWrite, @Flumadiddle, and @woahhitherepal! I'll be reviewing your poem today. I found several things that could be improved and edited, so I may be particular. First things first, if ...

Hello Flumadiddle. I’ll be reviewing your short story today, and hopefully this will help! After all, she's candle wax. Hard and smooth. I found this really plain-spoken. I think you ...

Hey marms! I'll drop a little review here, hopefully it'll help! :D i'll get to know him soon enough whether he is kind or harsh, lucky or not. but, from ...

Hello! Here to drop a quick review in. Before I start my actual review, and I'm sure you already know this, but I would like to address this anyway: I ...

Hi again, DemonGoddess. Here once again with another hopefully helpful review! I like what you have going on here. It's very organized, which helps the mood and theme carry through. ...

Hello! Congrats on hitting the spotlight. I don't want to spend my whole review on this, but grammar was definitely an issue. This piece is definitely very raw and you ...

Hello! Based on this first chapter, I see a couple of things I could point out as suggestions! This chapter was a little short, not going to lie. I think ...

Hey there! Saw this piece and I thought I might as well review it! I like how you kept the mood throughout this poem. It stayed strong everywhere, but in ...

Hey there! I will be reviewing your poem today! Let's dive right in! :D On the strings of my helium dreams I am in love with this imagery. Great way ...

Hey there, DemonGoddess! I'll hop in for a quick review! So, this poem was quite straight to the point. Minus the formatting, of course, haha. I would say for reading ...

Hey there, I'll be reviewing your piece today! I love how you start and end in question form. It was a little rocky at the beginning; I saw a whole ...

Hey there, pizzaroll! I'll be reviewing your work this review day. I would like to start off by saying this is a very wonderful topic to write about. I've seen ...

Hello there, JustPerks! I'll be reviewing your piece on this wonderful review day! So, without further ado, let's dive right in! :D Passerby walked on, This line itself seems a ...

Hey there, DemonGoddess. I will be answering your questions, and maybe addressing some of my own suggestions in addition. 1. How did this make you feel while you were reading ...

Hello there, DemonGoddess. I’ll be reviewing your work for this review day! :D So without further ado, let’s dive right in! I have to admit, the fourth line (fa) was ...