A/N I don't even know what this is. Also it kind of falls apart at the end. I like the first stanza. Help me.
Wow, I thought this was really good! I don't think it fell apart at the last stanza, the last stanza made it feel like the whole poem was free verse, but it took gradual realization and then BAM you see it! And honestly, I like free verse more. I didn't even know it was the year of the dog. I LOVE dogs. This poem was so adorable and, if I'm not mistaken, I feel like you were sending the message that last year, the storm, might have brought in some goodness this year. Oh my pancakes, the simplicity was so complex when you get closer. Ooh big words. XD I know this review was short, but I wanted to say it again: I really like this poem.
Hey marms! I'll drop a little review here, hopefully it'll help!
i'll get to know him soon enoughwhether he is kind or harsh,lucky or not. but, from whati've heard dogs are good friends.
Hey there!!I am here for a review. Well, mostly because I was interested to read this piece you wrote. Before anything else, I like your theme and images used. Your poem is well-written. It can be understood in so many fascinating ways.The meaning and significance can be observed. I liked how you made use of stanzas, for it showed order. I suggest you use capitalization (if you want to) and add more to the strength of the image you are trying to express. Nonetheless, you did an amazing job! I hope to read more of your works
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