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For a moment the title made me wonder, what is it about? but the moment i started reading The gears turn incessantly Pausing for no one. Not time, nor life ...

Hey there, liked your piece of writing, as topic of friendship is vastly covered and written by a number of people..... It is always lovely to see how different people ...

A well written poem, i must say. It had the right ingredients: A clear cut situation Good rhymes Nice flow . Right from the start, you justified the title well ...

Hey there..... I found this amazing poem ........ Both the title and situation. It reveals how broader the scope of poetry is.... One can choose any topic and write about ...

Hey Arif, This poem is more like a paragraph, I would suggest you to break it into parts, make stanzas and use punctuations. It seems like a story but since ...

Hey, Nitewol, nice poem I kind of liked it specially the two parts that if taken separately , are really good. I would say separately because as you jump on ...

Hello friend, Nice attempt , I must say, send it to your girlfriend and she will love it and better connect to it. However, it comes equally pleasings to us ...

Hey, Jordin I stopped by your poem to see what you have to say with a captivating title@ The Dead'/ I liked your effort, so let me first appreciate you ...

Hello, Let me review this for you. Ok starting with the first stanza: Words can be kind, Words can be mean, Words can be sad Or bring music to your ...

Hey, I feel you are easy going with your feeling and let them out in a good way. The poem is a good reflection of your feelings but need little ...

Hello, Just read your poem, the very idea of clouds added liveliness to your poem. So did the linkage of young age to the ambition of flying. However, things turned ...

Hey, young poet It always feels good to read some good poems coming from young writers. I like the idea of great man ...now a dead man. Reviewing it.... I ...

Hey Niteowl, First , let me appreciate that you dare chose an interesting yet a unique topic bringing out new dimension and diversity to the poem, that actually exists. One ...

Hey Rosan, Nice poem, theme goes well with written stuff. Written pretty simple and sweet. Liked the rhyming, consistently carried i the whole poem. Just find this line bit upsetting ...

hello, nice poem........ good title and also the overall poem. Loved a few lines: - If I am not granted what I want; Why not have it? -Because we take ...