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Re: Reassurance
This poem was great! I loved the theme and plot, and how realistic it was. you portrayed the truths of society very well, you should be proud of that! I ...
Dec 29, 2019 -
Re: Dear Life
This poem was great! I loved it. I liked how well you portrayed the character's wanting for a new life. I did catch a couple of mistakes here and there, ...
Dec 27, 2019 -
Re: Trashy Hotel Room
I loved this poem! It helped me realize how lucky I am to have things, even if I do not think of it. It is very easy to read and ...
Dec 25, 2019 -
Re: What Is Christmas All About?
This poem was great! It was really fun to read, and the ending made me laugh. It was unexpected, yet kept with the theme of the poem. I loved it! ...
Dec 24, 2019 -
Re: My Best Friend is Gay.
This piece was wonderful! It had such a deep meaning to it, and it really showed that a life is a life, no matter what you think, feel, or believe. ...
Dec 23, 2019 -
Re: Go Ahead and Kill Me
Hey Kathryn! I loved this chapter. The first chapter is always the hardest, introducing the characters and such, but you did really well! Your grammar, punctuation, and spelling was OK. ...
Dec 22, 2019 -
Re: Let Me Go
I must say, this is one of the best poems I have ever read, ever. You portray the harsh reality of depression well in this poem. The way you formatted ...
Dec 20, 2019 -
Re: Dear Earth
Hello! I must say, I really enjoyed this poem. It was a very good way to put it. It is better to understand what is happening if you make it ...
Dec 19, 2019 -
Re: Love Me
This poem was incredible! I loved reading it and it flowed really well. The plot is great and you obviously thought about it a lot. You only misspelled one word, ...
Dec 18, 2019 -
Re: The Candle
This poem was AMAZING!! I absolutely loved reading it. The plot and theme is great. The title is awesome, even though it is so simple, I thought it would be ...
Dec 17, 2019 -
Re: Memory
This was a wonderful little poem to read! I really liked it, how the narrator was telling us about her relationship. Your grammar, spelling and punctuation was OK. Three things ...
Dec 16, 2019 -
Re: Do They Exist?
This poem was amazing! I tapped on it, expecting a dumb alien story or something, but I was soooo wrong! I loved how you wrote it (incredibly well) and it ...
Dec 15, 2019 -
Re: My 2 A.M. Thoughts
Wow, this poem was great! It was very relatable (because somehow on weekends I always end up staying up late) and I really enjoyed that. Your punctuation and grammar was ...
Dec 14, 2019 -
Re: CRAZY YOUNG HEARTS
I loved this poem. It was so well written, the plot was amazing, and you can write really REALLY well. Your punctuation, spelling, and grammar was fantastic, it was very ...
Dec 13, 2019 -
Re: Go a Head and Kill Me
Kathryn, this chapter was really good, especially because you wrote it all in math class with out being caught 😉. The theme is very good and the lot is even ...
Dec 12, 2019
