Hello! I must say, I really enjoyed this poem. It was a very good way to put it. It is better to understand what is happening if you make it as if the Earth has feelings. It can be very hard to read about what is happening, and what we are doing, but you make easy to read. I didn't really see any spelling mistakes, except in the fifth to last line you put "thank" and "you" together into one word (thankyou). Besides that, your punctuation, spelling, and grammar is all fine. Keep on writing and Merry (early) Christmas!!
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