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Re: I Love My Mom
Hey Aris :) When most of us wrote messages, send pictures or gave flowers to our moms to make her special, you chose to write a poem. Very thoughtful and ...
May 12, 2014 -
Re: A Love Affair with Orange Juice
Hello Finnwinterfall :) Congratulations. This is a rare and a simple concept in poetry. When most of us try finding out the meanings of poems with deep expressions and confusing ...
Mar 16, 2014 -
Re: think about it
Hey Iggy :) Nice poem! I loved the way you chose to start your poem. Simple always works. So it did, once again. I'm not sure about the punctuation you ...
Feb 10, 2014 -
Re: The Curious Romances of Edmund Sullivan
Hey Silverlock :) Just like the title 'The Curious Romances of Edmund Sullivan' says, I surely did expect a romantic story. But gosh! When I read the entire thing, I ...
Jan 10, 2014 -
Re: Kisses to Tears
Hey ConverseFireGirl :) I love the title, sounds very rare and nice! It really strikes the reader's mind, the way your words mourn. The pain in realizing that the most ...
Jan 10, 2014 -
Re: Summer Glass
Hey Raven :) I absolutely love the title. Very creative! I cannot really find any flaws in this. I must say, it is B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L :) I like the way you ...
Jan 7, 2014 -
Re: Just Can't Let Go
Giggggggi :D I love reading your poems, they are so good! About this one, I beautifully got the meaning, the depth. Your words, the meaning it carries clearly shows it ...
Jan 6, 2014 -
Re: I Will Fall. Again.
Hey Gigi :) So you are a genius at short poems! A beautiful one. Well written! Its really difficult to bring out a complete meaning in a few sentences, especially ...
Jan 6, 2014 -
Re: You Can't Change the Beginning or Ending
Hey Gigi :) The statement you chose to be your heading, is very true and some people never understand that. I really didn't understand what exactly you meant by 'Blacken ...
Jan 6, 2014 -
Re: Love Stories
Hey Cha :) This is beautiful :') I can't really find any mistakes in here as I'm in love with the thought of true love ;) I like the fact ...
Jan 4, 2014 -
Re: Heaven on Earth
Hey Wallflower :) According to my interpretation, I think this poem is about the oppositions young couples or people in love face from their family and the society. It deals ...
Jan 4, 2014 -
Re: happy
This is an evidence to the fact that it only requires a few words to show the beauty of anything on earth. Its the heart which writes sometimes, this is ...
Jan 4, 2014 -
Re: The Autumn Moon
Hey Noni :) To start with, your title is very attractive and nice! It gives alot of meaning. 'The Autumn moon hung brightly shining, through the blue-black sky, I saw ...
Jan 4, 2014 -
Re: Don't wait for me
Hey Butterfinger :) A well written poem! Even though I'm not much of a poetress, I loved reading your poem. I Think you could have started with a capital letter ...
Jan 4, 2014 -
Re: Recipe for a Good Life
Hey Cha! Wow, a poem in the form of a recipe that too about life? Wonderful thought friend! I like the way you made the most required needs for a ...
Jan 4, 2014
