It's hard to take a stand
In a world where all I've known
Is to Fall.
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Hey Gigi
So you are a genius at short poems!
A beautiful one.
Well written!
Its really difficult to bring out a complete meaning in a few sentences, especially when its a poem.
But you, you are simply awesome in this I must say.
Only one opinion, your title like @Sophiewrites told below.
All the very best!
Love,
Krish
Thanks a lot, Krish!
Thanks a lot, Krish!
You are welcome Gigi
Hi, Raven here to review.
I like your poem, is simple but it speaks a lot to the readers. I always admire how poets can express what they want in short sentences because instead of long, dragging sentences. Short sentences empathize the meaning and the significance of what you're trying to say.
What you've written above, is very well done, your title is also well chosen. It was what reeled me in.
-Keep up the good work!
-Rx
Thanks for the review! :3
Pleasure.
Hello!
I thought I'd give you a short review to your poem.
It is hard to give a message in just three lines,yet I think you managed to!
I guess this couldn't be any longer, as it's the simplicity that struck to me and makes the whole thing stuck in one's mind.
My only nitpick would be the title, I'd have left out the ,,And.Again'' but that's just my personal preference.
Keep up the good work!
-sophiewrites
Thanks for mentioning that Sophie. I agree with you, about the title
I suck at choosing titles, so I always think about them a lot whenever I write reviews haha
Thanks a lot, Sophie.
I think I'll go with your suggestion about the title. :3
Yeah sophie
Yaaaay Gigi B)
no problem!