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Re: I love you, mom
Hi. This is kman134. i'm here to review your work. I love my mother. She brought me into this world and gave me a lot of love. I can rely ...
May 14, 2017 -
Re: In the Wind
Hi. this is kman134. i'm here to review your work. you have painted a very serene of the landscape. your emphasis on nature was very peaceful and transparent. it was ...
May 2, 2017 -
Re: Limbo
Hi. this is kamn134. i'm here to review your work. Limbo--an uncertain period of awaiting a decision or resolution; also, in catholic doctrine, a plane of existence that functions as ...
May 2, 2017 -
Re: I'm sorry
Hi. this is man134. i'm here to review your work. First off, this pome was very touching and serene in the tone. it shows how much you care about this ...
May 2, 2017 -
Re: Lullaby
Hi. this is Kman134. i'm here to write a review for you. I really like this poem. its realistic setting and romantic atmosphere gave life to your writing. each stanza ...
Apr 13, 2017 -
Re: Mirrors
hi. this is man134. i'm here to review your work. you say that when you look into the mirror, all you see is hatred and self-loathing. well, there is a ...
Apr 13, 2017 -
Re: Words
hi. this is kman134. i'm here to review your work. It's hard to find the right word to say. every time one appears it would immediately disappear from your mind. ...
Apr 12, 2017 -
Re: good bye version 2
Hi. this is kman134. i'm here to review your work. First off, this was really short. it was simple, yet a little thought provoking. this was a perfect example of ...
Apr 12, 2017 -
Re: La mort est belle; Part I - He was amongst us
Hi. this is kamn134. i'm here to review your work. first off, this was a pretty good poem. it is very romantic and spiritual. at first, from reading it, i ...
Mar 29, 2017 -
Re: Close My Eyes
Hi. This is kman134. I'm here to review your work. From reading this, it gives off a sense of psychological thriller. "A car door, slam! Take a breath. Angry voices, ...
Mar 29, 2017 -
Re: Dreams of Ecstasy
Hi. This is kman134. i'm here to review your work. First off, i like this poem. it gives a fantastic, metaphysical sense of dreaming where you just want to float ...
Mar 29, 2017 -
Re: a girl filled with wanderlust
Hi. This is Kman134. I'm here to review your work. the poem was well detailed and well-represented. your reinterpretation of the Rapunzel fairy tale was ingenious with the philosophical ideas ...
Mar 22, 2017 -
Re: stars
Hi. this is Kman134. i'm here to review your work. this poem was excellent. it was simple and had a unique approach on nature and life. the emotional tone and ...
Mar 22, 2017 -
Re: undignified
Hi. This is kman134. I'm here to review your work. It was short and simple, but it was pretty good. I can understand how you feel. sometimes, when i'm depressed, ...
Mar 18, 2017 -
Re: Play Pretend
Hi. This is Kman134. i'm here to review your work. The sis a brilliant insight on childhood and on the concepts of false personality and identities. when we're children, we ...
Mar 18, 2017
