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kman134

  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: gone

    Hi. This is Kman134. i'm here to review your work. This was very disturbing and twisted. everyone's killed off quickly and the perpetrator is the one you trust the most, ...

    Nov 8, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Abused

    Hi. This is Kman134. i'm here to review your work. the story at a very gory and bloody exterior. however, i'm aware that wasn't the point of the story and ...

    Aug 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical Re: Bittersweet

    Hi. This is Kman134. i'm here to review your work. I enjoyed the elements of death and sadness that was in this poem. this kind of symbolism makes me think ...

    Aug 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Literature, Romantic Re: Your Heart

    Hi. This is Kman134. i'm here to review your work. This poem has a very earthy and natural atmosphere from the beginning. the rest of the poem then shifted to ...

    Jul 31, 2017
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Exorbitant self love

    Hi. This is Kman134. I'm here to review your work. honestly, i know what it's like dealing with narcissists and having to deal with one. my parents have been divorced ...

    Jun 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I'm a bad person

    Hi. This is Kman134. I'm here to review your work. At first, i thought this poem was suppose to be about sociopathy and committing heinous acts. sadly, i was wrong. ...

    Jun 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Deprived

    Hi. my name is kman134. i'm here to review your work. Honestly, i too tend to suffer from insomnia. those restless nights tended to be a hassle to my health. ...

    Jun 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Historical Fiction Re: Maycomb

    Hi. this is kman134. i'm here to review your work. First off, i have never read To Kill a Mockingbird, but i've loved how it's one of the best books ...

    Jun 4, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: A Day In Early April

    Hi. this is kman134. I'm here to review your work. i like Haiku. it is one of the most transpiring forms of Japanese poetry. the way it's structured is more ...

    Jun 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Make your own mark

    Hi. This is Kman134. I'm here to review your work. At first, when i read this, i thought it was a superhero fic. however, the more i read, the more ...

    Jun 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Bitter Goodbye

    Hi. This is Kman134. I'm here to review your work. This is a pretty good song lyric. it reminds me of Forgetting Sarah Marshall. you know, that movie about a ...

    May 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Sick Shows

    Hi. my name is kman134.i'm here to review your work. This was pretty disturbing and horrific. the emotional tone was dreadful with a hint of sadism. the description of tormented ...

    May 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Sleepy

    Hi. This is kman134. i'm here to review your work. This was very beautiful. its hard to find a poem about someone sleeping, especially one with so much emotion. the ...

    May 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: I was always there

    Hi. This is Kman134. I'm here to review your work. This was a very good poem. it is very emotional and romantic. it is hard to forget someone. they are ...

    May 25, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The First Sight

    hi. this is kman134. i'm here to review your work. This is a pretty unique poem. the way it is written is like a short story, yet the theme and ...

    May 14, 2017


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