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Re: gone
Hi. This is Kman134. i'm here to review your work. This was very disturbing and twisted. everyone's killed off quickly and the perpetrator is the one you trust the most, ...
Nov 8, 2017 -
Re: Abused
Hi. This is Kman134. i'm here to review your work. the story at a very gory and bloody exterior. however, i'm aware that wasn't the point of the story and ...
Aug 1, 2017 -
Re: Bittersweet
Hi. This is Kman134. i'm here to review your work. I enjoyed the elements of death and sadness that was in this poem. this kind of symbolism makes me think ...
Aug 1, 2017 -
Re: Your Heart
Hi. This is Kman134. i'm here to review your work. This poem has a very earthy and natural atmosphere from the beginning. the rest of the poem then shifted to ...
Jul 31, 2017 -
Re: Exorbitant self love
Hi. This is Kman134. I'm here to review your work. honestly, i know what it's like dealing with narcissists and having to deal with one. my parents have been divorced ...
Jun 23, 2017 -
Re: I'm a bad person
Hi. This is Kman134. I'm here to review your work. At first, i thought this poem was suppose to be about sociopathy and committing heinous acts. sadly, i was wrong. ...
Jun 23, 2017 -
Re: Deprived
Hi. my name is kman134. i'm here to review your work. Honestly, i too tend to suffer from insomnia. those restless nights tended to be a hassle to my health. ...
Jun 4, 2017 -
Re: Maycomb
Hi. this is kman134. i'm here to review your work. First off, i have never read To Kill a Mockingbird, but i've loved how it's one of the best books ...
Jun 4, 2017 -
Re: A Day In Early April
Hi. this is kman134. I'm here to review your work. i like Haiku. it is one of the most transpiring forms of Japanese poetry. the way it's structured is more ...
Jun 4, 2017 -
Re: Make your own mark
Hi. This is Kman134. I'm here to review your work. At first, when i read this, i thought it was a superhero fic. however, the more i read, the more ...
Jun 3, 2017 -
Re: Bitter Goodbye
Hi. This is Kman134. I'm here to review your work. This is a pretty good song lyric. it reminds me of Forgetting Sarah Marshall. you know, that movie about a ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: Sick Shows
Hi. my name is kman134.i'm here to review your work. This was pretty disturbing and horrific. the emotional tone was dreadful with a hint of sadism. the description of tormented ...
May 25, 2017 -
Re: Sleepy
Hi. This is kman134. i'm here to review your work. This was very beautiful. its hard to find a poem about someone sleeping, especially one with so much emotion. the ...
May 25, 2017 -
Re: I was always there
Hi. This is Kman134. I'm here to review your work. This was a very good poem. it is very emotional and romantic. it is hard to forget someone. they are ...
May 25, 2017 -
Re: The First Sight
hi. this is kman134. i'm here to review your work. This is a pretty unique poem. the way it is written is like a short story, yet the theme and ...
May 14, 2017
