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Re: Wild and Free
Hello, this is Kman134, here, to review your poem. I love these of anti-domestication from society and feeling the freedom of being back into the wild. As human beings, we ...
Feb 18, 2016 -
Re: Last night I dreamed somebody loved me.
hey, this is Kman134, here, for a review of your work. The thought of somebody loving you is a wonderful thing, knowing that you wouldn't be alone, anymore. the symbolisms ...
Feb 17, 2016 -
Re: Why Did You Leave Me Like That
Hey, this is Kman134, here, to review you work. This is a pretty good poem. I agree that seeing a loved one die is heartbreaking, especially one that died on ...
Feb 16, 2016 -
Re: I'm Allergic to Homework
Hey, this is Kman134 here to review your work. Well, to be frank, I thought this was a nice piece of work; it had such a dark humorous edge in ...
Jan 6, 2016 -
Re: Flight Within the Chime
i enjoyed this poem and loved the use of words within it. Some parts i didn't understand but thought were fun to read. "Do not recall Our sky A chime ...
Dec 16, 2015 -
Re: Laughter Is The Best Medicine
hey, this is Kman134, here to review your work. This is pretty good and i love the laughter concept you used. I agree with you, the best medicine is laughter. ...
Dec 16, 2015 -
Re: Rabbit's Roar
this is kman134 here with a review. this is very good insight on the life of a rabbit. You can see his irritation on how much he has suffered, comically. ...
Dec 4, 2015 -
Re: My Darkness
Hey, this is Kman134 and i'm here to review. This is a very good poem. The narration was deep and romantic. the first part of it had a somber feel ...
Dec 4, 2015 -
Re: Civil War
Hey, this is Kman134, here to review your work. So far, this is an interesting story that captures the darker themes of Marvel; it starts off with a sad beginning ...
Dec 3, 2015 -
Re: Storm
hello, this is kman134 and i'm here to review. "Heaven drips drops of heavy rain relentlessly tapping my window pane. View the earth drowning in vain never to find groud ...
Nov 30, 2015 -
Re: another poem about Love and Nature
Hey, this is kman134 and i'm here to review. i have read the entire poem and found it pretty interesting. the problem with it is the spacing and the grammar, ...
Nov 30, 2015 -
Re: Unfinished Business
Hey, i'm kman134, i'm here to review. i love this poem and found it very ominous. the stanzas were a little bit off and should be improved a lift, but, ...
Nov 18, 2015 -
Re: my gibberish take on hypocrisy.
this is kman134 here to review your work. i absolutely agree with you on this take on hypocrisy; people tell you that they believe in this and that, but when ...
Nov 18, 2015 -
Re: The Book and the Doll
hi, this is kman134 and i am here to review. this poem brought chill down my spine; i loved how you depicted the doll, such as mentioning its' cold, lifeless ...
Nov 18, 2015 -
Re: lovers
hey there, this is kman134 and this is a review. so far, this is a pretty neat poem; i love the use of the theme of love and sex and ...
Nov 7, 2015
