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Re: Got a Beautiful Life
Hiya Mialynire ! After reading your poem, I honestly felt more optimistic about life! As per my comprehension, the persona seems to have a very optimistic and buoyant outlook unto ...
Jan 14, 2016 -
Re: Restless Mind
Hello there and welcome to YWS :D I also had to read your poem several times to fully understand what you were actually trying to portray here. It is a ...
Jan 11, 2016 -
Re: Goodbye
Warm greetings friend! Wow! such an amazing work of art! From the title to the very last words of your short story, the emotional climate was very well maintained. I ...
Jan 11, 2016 -
Re: Look here.
Hiya brokenbeastxx! I had to read your piece of literature over and over again to fully comprehend the meaning. Upon reading your poem, I was somehow able to relate to ...
Jan 10, 2016 -
Re: A Princess and Her Queen
Hiya Msho13, I really like your poem. This poem clearly is an emotional and heart-touching one. From the first line to the last, I was able to relate to it. ...
Jan 9, 2016 -
Re: Giant Teddy Bear
Hi InfiniteRectangles :) Nice poem. This poem is rather unique and out of the box. I really like how you have turned just a simple desire of owning a giant ...
Dec 29, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 2: We are in Very Big Trouble
Hey LordZeus! [nice name] Your idea behind this sci-fi novel is practically every teenager's dream[I can't say about others but I know mine is]. Being a teenager with super powers-what ...
Aug 19, 2015 -
Re: Beyond the limits of inspiration
Hi Mai Selim! Firstly, I have to say that you are one of the best writers I have ever come across. You are such an inspirational person! "It's not about ...
Aug 19, 2015 -
Re: Game Over
Hey Pamplemousse! Kay here! :) Rarely, anyone has the ability to convey powerful messages in just a couple of lines. [I for one, am not one of those "rare-ones"]. I ...
Aug 19, 2015 -
Re: Esterace - Prologue
Hey SuperAnimalCrossing! :) (cool name) First of all, I would like to thank you for writing this prologue. I really wanted to review something like this. I love your idea! ...
Jun 5, 2015 -
Re: the Edge of love
Hi there, Tobiah! Kay here for a review. Okay, so first of all, I love your theme-LOVE!!!!!! It seems like that you are writing this poem out of experience. LOL. ...
Jun 5, 2015 -
Re: The Deer King
Hello, ChristataAstera! Kay here! :) I have to admit that I really love your poem. You are truly amazing! After quite sometime, I have come across a truly imaginative poem. ...
Mar 27, 2015 -
Re: Thoughts as he went further and further
Hello RituparnaBhowmik, Kay here! First of all, I really love your concept of this phase of love.(Which is undeniably a part of everyones lives'). I totally understand your idea behind ...
Mar 12, 2015 -
Re: The true suicide story
Hey PerfectWeapon! So I was reviewing another piece of literary when I read your review, where you kind of directed me to your work. Anyways, I found it interesting because ...
Mar 6, 2015 -
Re: Fire
Hello Shiney! First of all I would like to commend your wonderful idea of bringing to light the other side (by which I mean the beautiful side) of fire, which ...
Mar 6, 2015
