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  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Got a Beautiful Life

    Hiya Mialynire ! After reading your poem, I honestly felt more optimistic about life! As per my comprehension, the persona seems to have a very optimistic and buoyant outlook unto ...

    Jan 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Restless Mind

    Hello there and welcome to YWS :D I also had to read your poem several times to fully understand what you were actually trying to portray here. It is a ...

    Jan 11, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Goodbye

    Warm greetings friend! Wow! such an amazing work of art! From the title to the very last words of your short story, the emotional climate was very well maintained. I ...

    Jan 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Theatre Re: Look here.

    Hiya brokenbeastxx! I had to read your piece of literature over and over again to fully comprehend the meaning. Upon reading your poem, I was somehow able to relate to ...

    Jan 10, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Princess and Her Queen

    Hiya Msho13, I really like your poem. This poem clearly is an emotional and heart-touching one. From the first line to the last, I was able to relate to it. ...

    Jan 9, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: Giant Teddy Bear

    Hi InfiniteRectangles :) Nice poem. This poem is rather unique and out of the box. I really like how you have turned just a simple desire of owning a giant ...

    Dec 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 2: We are in Very Big Trouble

    Hey LordZeus! [nice name] Your idea behind this sci-fi novel is practically every teenager's dream[I can't say about others but I know mine is]. Being a teenager with super powers-what ...

    Aug 19, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, General Re: Beyond the limits of inspiration

    Hi Mai Selim! Firstly, I have to say that you are one of the best writers I have ever come across. You are such an inspirational person! "It's not about ...

    Aug 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Horror Re: Game Over

    Hey Pamplemousse! Kay here! :) Rarely, anyone has the ability to convey powerful messages in just a couple of lines. [I for one, am not one of those "rare-ones"]. I ...

    Aug 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Esterace - Prologue

    Hey SuperAnimalCrossing! :) (cool name) First of all, I would like to thank you for writing this prologue. I really wanted to review something like this. I love your idea! ...

    Jun 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Romantic Re: the Edge of love

    Hi there, Tobiah! Kay here for a review. Okay, so first of all, I love your theme-LOVE!!!!!! It seems like that you are writing this poem out of experience. LOL. ...

    Jun 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: The Deer King

    Hello, ChristataAstera! Kay here! :) I have to admit that I really love your poem. You are truly amazing! After quite sometime, I have come across a truly imaginative poem. ...

    Mar 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Thoughts as he went further and further

    Hello RituparnaBhowmik, Kay here! First of all, I really love your concept of this phase of love.(Which is undeniably a part of everyones lives'). I totally understand your idea behind ...

    Mar 12, 2015
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The true suicide story

    Hey PerfectWeapon! So I was reviewing another piece of literary when I read your review, where you kind of directed me to your work. Anyways, I found it interesting because ...

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Fire

    Hello Shiney! First of all I would like to commend your wonderful idea of bringing to light the other side (by which I mean the beautiful side) of fire, which ...

    Mar 6, 2015


Too often we crave the extraordinary in life, without even learning how to cherish the ordinary first. Friend, I promise you this: if you can learn to take joy in the simple mundane things in life, the extraordinary will take care of itself, it'll be on its way, hurrying towards you. But if you skip the first part, it'll ever evade you.
— Arcticus