goldenrebel

I had a bit a of trouble understanding the poem. From my point of view it appears that you are describing how certain acts affect your spiritual self. Your grammar ...

Okay, so I'll do a review like I said I would man, just don't expect it to be really long and awesome cause I aint good at these. What I ...

I agree with your writing man, the human race is not the best of species. We have caused death and destruction and it seems like we'll never stop, almost like ...

A nice, well thought-out poem in my opinion man. I like the bit of rhyming you put into it as it makes the poem more entertaining for the reader. I ...

Yep, I wonder how many people feel this way about our society now as I am one of them that does. I see plenty of posts on Facebook of people ...

Like Veeren said I am also intrigued with hat these voices are and I ask that you continue on with the concept. The only error I could really notice was ...

Nice poem, I can understand the meaning of it. Your broke up the stanzas well, it flowed along smoothly as I read it and was easy to understand. I like ...

Pretty nice poem about friendship you wrote here. I did not spot any spelling or grammatical errors. I noticed at the end of each stanza how you tried to make ...

I found the poem interesting to read as you described nightfall coming to the village. You broke up your stanzas very well so that the words flowed smoothly and kept ...

Enjoyed reading your poem, was short but quick to the point on what you were talking about. It was pretty dark but I found it touching and relate-able to. I ...

I kinda had trouble following this poem and I was not able to really relate to it. I'm not sure what I don't like about it, I suspect it's just ...

A pretty good and original poem I would say. I can't think of anything similar I have read to this and I enjoyed your pattern.

Your poem was very mellow and made me feel joyful. I enjoyed the smoothness and your transition from line to line. You chose your words wisely and if I could ...

Its cheesy and cliche but I still enjoyed reading it. I can relate to this with the relationship I have right now. I enjoyed how you matched up your first ...

I found this very interesting to read and I liked how you took a widely used comparison and made it unique. I enjoyed how even though of the length and ...