Published October 27, 2012
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Very good! It has good sentiment and meaning and flows well to the tongue. I am impressed! I feel I can relate to it. It's so hard to find poems that are so whole like yours is. You should be proud. I love the simile you used with the fish. Very inventive and imaginative. You used good imagery too. Some people go over the top and ruin the flow and others don't do enough description and ruin the affect, but you've got it just right! It's brilliant!
Nice poem, I can understand the meaning of it. Your broke up the stanzas well, it flowed along smoothly as I read it and was easy to understand. I like how you compared the fish to a prisoner. I don't see much grammatical errors except for the endings you put at each stanza. I don't know if you have to but I never put a comm or period at the end of mine. Overall I'd give it a 4/5.