Ode to Love

I really loved it even though I thought it was kinda cliche. It was very beautifully written. It was cheesy, but in a good way. But there is one thing that I would like to point out
So stay with love
And keep a warm heart

So send love
And make someone smile

So keep love
And feel whole
I agree with LittleFox and there shouldn't be so many so's, but other than that, I think it is a wonderful poem! Keep writing!

Its cheesy and cliche but I still enjoyed reading it. I can relate to this with the relationship I have right now. I enjoyed how you matched up your first three paragraphs with your last three paragraphs and how you did everything in groups of threes which keeps the reader more entertained.

Don't worry too much about your works being cheesy, sometimes cheesy is really very sweet. And if what you're writing is true, then so what if its a bit cheesy? I like this poem a lot and I think almost everyone can agree with it. I don't espeacialy like the last six lines, I think it'd sound a tad bit better without the so's. But that's not my call. Overall I think this is very well written and very true. For a first, this is great. My first poem was so...messy, haha.