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Re: A Man of Thoughts
Hi nicholas42! This is reviewer, GG. This poem was very deep, and so therefore, very interesting. You brought forth the confusing parts of our minds, the intricate parts. Okay, there ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Script
Hello, GG to reviewing your poem. : ) I truly loved this one. You brought forth exaggeration with the boldness which I thought was a wonderful idea. Your wording is ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: A Golden Red
Wooftie. This is a scary little poem, haha. It is very interesting, yet quite dark. I found it a great piece of work. I just suggest one little thing. Punctuation. ...
Jun 23, 2013 -
Re: Release
Goodness gracious. This is an, oddly enough, freaky poem. Its very interesting, very deep. I enjoyed it a lot. Its not too hard to understand what it is about but ...
Jun 23, 2013 -
Re: Infectious
I found this a very simple, very well written story. Something I do suggest is that at the end of your sentences in the discussion, to add punctuation. It makes ...
Jun 23, 2013 -
Re: First Love
: ) You can tell that this truly happened, and that it is as real as anything. I admire that when a writer can pull something like that out and ...
Jun 23, 2013 -
Re: Who is He
Oh. My. Goodness. This is an excellent poem my friend! Where in the world did this come from? I am not easily astonished or so quickly moved by a poem. ...
Jun 23, 2013 -
Re: Boxes
Wow. I absolutely love the idea of our hearts being like boxes. Its a very interesting theory indeed! I, haha, found a single spelling error. I'm the spelling freak, so ...
Jun 23, 2013 -
Re: Too much Snow
Wow. That's a very interesting poem. I am a bit confused by which style this is, even though its a great little one. It sounds a bit of a song ...
Jun 23, 2013 -
Re: Heartless Love
Wow! Beautiful poem! I just have to point out one thing. I had the exact same thing pointed out to me, and it didn't make sense at first, but in ...
Jun 18, 2013 -
Re: The Boy
Oh my goodness.. I'm trying not to cry.. :( This is a beautiful little poem that..wow.. And I thought I had bad days. I truly love the last sentence because ...
Jun 17, 2013 -
Re: A Line
This is a wonderful poem! It pulls a lot of laughs and you smile through out the whole thing. Its just a simple one that you did very well. I ...
Jun 17, 2013 -
Re: Heat of Heroism
Wow! Very interesting poem. I liked it a lot. I do have to ask a question. What is this poem..about exactly? It sounds like perhaps it was about the Colorado ...
Jun 17, 2013 -
Re: A Spider's Thread
Wooftie, very interesting poem. I agree with several of your points, which is not an easy thing to do; get your readers to understand. I found that you repeated several ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Turning the New Fall Leaf
Wow, beautiful! Its very easy to connect to, and understand. : ) As much as I like the rhyming thing, I believe you could possibly take some of it out. ...
May 26, 2013
