Heartless Love

Contradicting title. Hey Rose, I like this poem it's sweet and realistic. We're bond by chains of love, I like that. It's wistful as well, a story that's written down in history about love.

If you don't get what I'm trying to say, I don't either. ;p ^o^

That's a good question. Why is love so complicated?

This poem was so clear and really resonated with how i feel towards love. I really liked your second last paragraph, because you have illustrated love and how it captivates you. Your rhyming was awesome and was good to see you didn't use generic words when rhyming. Your writing is very nice and kept me interested with each line. Keep up the great work!

I love this poem, the rhyme was on the dot, the slow was very good though the first two stanzas had extremely long lines in them it was still very good, and the point of the poem was very clearly defined for the audience. I absolutely loved that last stanza: "And some day, love, will be your corner stone." that was just beautiful right there. I loved the feeling that went with it and just very riveting and awe-inspiring. Don't waste your talent, keep writing!
-Demora

This is a great poem, I like the fact that you made it rhyme really well. I feel this is what love is really like. Your vocabulary is really good and I feel you didn't have to search for words that rhymed I feel that it just came naturally.
overall this is a great poem, i am looking forward to reading more off your work, Gothgirl

really good i love this... It gives out good feeling and expression and explains how much people are really feeling! Sends out good messages to all those that have loved. I LOVE THE STRUCTURE AND HOW THIS IS WRITTEN! ITS EXCELLENT! I would really like to read more of your work because i think that your work is great. I like the punctuation and how you have used your words. I have no critizism, which is good! Its a fantastic poem and i love the way that you have rhymed those excellent words! I love the way you have wrote this with meaning, well it seems like you have anyway! I feel like you have vely strong, emotional feelings about this topic, i love that! I agree with the words that you have used to describe some things. WELL DONE! xxxxxxx

Wow! Beautiful poem!
I just have to point out one thing. I had the exact same thing pointed out to me, and it didn't make sense at first, but in time, it kinda will. I liked my style too.
Its just to perhaps take out the capitals of each beginning sentence if it is continued from the last one.
So, for example,
'Love does hurt and it pains,
(b)ut it's not worthless.'
Other than that, I think you did excellent. Though I'm a terrible reviewer, hopefully this helped! I genuinely look forward to reading more of your things!

Little Storm Writer, GG <3

Wow!!
That's really good. i loved how it starts out as hopeless and heart-breaking and then you kind of prove how its not all bad and you'll get through it.

I liked the last part where it's like

"It will teach you to stand on your own,
And strengthen your bones,
You’ll see how much you’ve grown,
And some day, love, will be your corner stone."

It inspired me, love it!