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Gallifreygal11 here, commenting/reviewing/critiquing and or editing, Well I just love this poem/. You a have great talent. The rhyming is wonderful. The vocabulary and wording is wonderful. The messag

Gallifreygal11 here, commenting/reviewing/editing/critiquing, First of all I love this piece. Your descriptions of Molly's short experiences are brilliant! The imagery is wonderful and I love the shor

Gallifreygal11 commenting/reviewing/editing/critiquing, This may be the most realistic, true poem I have ever read. I know exactly what it means. I have that voice it follows me everywhere. No matter ...

gallifreygal11 reviewing/editing/critiquing here, Well I want to start out on a positive note. I really like this poem! It has a strong message, valid reasoning, great imagery, and your descriptions ...

I really like this poem! It is very well written, lyrical, good imagery, and fine message. I love how it tells a short story, while still staying true to the ...

OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD! THIS IS AMAZING! I LOVE the concept of this! It's just so perfect! I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS PIECE. THE VOCABULARY, ...

I really love this vignette! It is a vignette righ? The descriptions and imagery is brilliant! The way you describe every single moment! He looks at the tiny form sprawled ...

He sound like a really fun and cool character! I really want to read a story with him. I hope you write one soon. It sounds like here will definitely ...

I really love this poem. It tells a story while still staying true to the art of poetry. Those are always my favorite poems! The story has a brilliant plotline. ...

I think this is a great story. I love poems that tell a story. Those are always the best ones! It definitely a very deep poem. I can tell it ...

This is a very special poem. I mean this by I love how in the beginning your friend is the one helping and letting you survive, but by the end ...

I really love this poem! I personally love acrostic! And there are so few truly good ones! But this one really does make me so happy that the acrostic poem ...

I LOVE this poem. The symbolism is great. The imagery is great. Your vocabulary is great! Everything is great! I love the poem. The story is so saddening. It almost ...

I love this vignette! This is a vignette right? Well anyway the way you tell us the readers about the life of this boy is wonderful. Your symbolism and imagery ...

I really like this poem. I really enjoy the symbolism and descriptions are great. The imagery is fantastic. You do a great job at telling a story. The way you ...