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Hi, The title doesn't live up to it! :( Especially the expectation of this poem being a really sad one when you didn't capitalized the title. I thought I would ...

Hi, I'm enchanted... A good one. The whole story is quite perfect enough, but not quite clarified enough. You started the story sad and ended with a resolution that seemed ...

Hi, You made me laughing (it's a humor poem after all), but I had to reread it slowly and again and again and aha! I broke a hahaha. The combination ...

Hi, I'm here (so obviously) to do what you'd asked me to do. I just write some thoughts about your poem as I read it like a poem should be. ...

Hi, I will make a freewriting review now, I wish you understand. *** My first impression was you are making a good image. I like how you relate the biology ...

Hi, Taha... This is your first haiku poem that I just read. Anyway, I'm happy seeing you writing haiku... :) Firstly, I love how the poem is being flowing. This ...

Hi, There is nothing more for me to say. This is one of the young poets' problem: Generalization of the ideas in a single scope. In a single scope is ...

Hi, Ah finally some calm poem to review. I love the theme although the theme is overused. I love the ideas although the ideas are overused. ...cliche. But hey, I ...

(Warning: 'You' here is mostly 'I' in your poem, so no hard feeling, 'kay?) Hi, I know, I know. These feelings are recurring to me almost every minutes. These jumbled ...

Hi, Felistia. Long time no see, aye? This is my first review over a long period of time, so bare with me, 'kay? Happy review day also! In a wide ...

Hi, It is a good metaphor. Really. So let's go into the meats, shall we? :3 I The picture of her life was perfect. She was pretty and smart, but ...

Hi, Like the previous reviewers had stated, I am loving this. I'm going fast and into the meat. I I had a dream, and in that dream his lips tasted ...

I believe in the brotherhood of all men, but I don't believe in wasting brotherhood on anyone who doesn't want to practice it with me. Brotherhood is a two-way street. ...

Hi. "At night when the stars light on my room, ​I sit by myself- ​talking to the moon." ​Talking To The Moon - Bruno Mars I love this. May I ...

Hi, French fascinated me. Nonetheless, I don't enter French Class in my school even the door is opened wide for me. I agree with Audy that emotions are not being ...