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Re: Stars
Hi Hadj, Felistia here with a short review on your poem. This is a pretty nice poem to read. I love that you set the stars to be a bit ...
Dec 6, 2015 -
Re: The Wonders of Winter
Hi TheUnknownWriter, Felistia here with a review on your poem. First I must say that for a quick piece of work this is really good. I love that you made ...
Dec 5, 2015 -
Re: My Darkness
Hi deathwave1, Felistia here with a review on your poem. I must say that I absolutely love this poem, it is so beautiful and full of emotion. This is what ...
Dec 4, 2015 -
Re: Train
Hi godlypopo, Felistia here with a review on you short story. The story: I find the story a little confusing on the whole, especially in the beginning. It might just ...
Dec 4, 2015 -
Re: That's Just How it Goes
Hi dogsrule5, Felistia here with a review on your poem. First love the concept, it is very inspiring to me. I picked up on some rhymes spotted through out the ...
Dec 2, 2015 -
Re: DIVINU: Chapters 12
Hi Youngwriter724, Felistia here with the review you requested. Warning: I am not the best at romantic stories, so I might not be of any use, but I will try ...
Dec 2, 2015 -
Re: Storm
Hi rubykae, Felistia here with a review on your poem. Firstly I want to say that I didn't even notice the dots between your lines, so they weren't annoying to ...
Dec 2, 2015 -
Re: Dragon Keeper Chapter 2
Hi dogsrule5, Felistia here with a review on your novel. Warning: I am not trying to be mean, I am just trying to help and the review ahead is going ...
Dec 2, 2015 -
Re: Dragon Keeper Chapter 1
Hi dogsrule5, Felistia here with a review on the first chapter in your novel. Firstly I have to say that this about the perfect size for a first chapter. Story: ...
Dec 1, 2015 -
Re: Dragon Keeper: Introduction
Hi dogsrule5, Felistia here with a review on what I take as an introduction. So if this is the first chapter of your work please let me know because we ...
Nov 30, 2015 -
Re: The Giving Curse Chapter 2
Hi Magestorrow, Felistia here with the review you requested on your story. I couldn't sleep so I decided to review your work. Story: You are developing the story well and ...
Nov 30, 2015 -
Re: night sky
Hi rubykae, Felistia here with a review on your poem. Firstly, happy review day. The story: There isn't really a story the poem is more of a description really. I ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: The sea side reminiscence
Hi Adreamer, Felistia here with a review on your short story. Firstly, happy review day. The story: There isn't really a story here, maybe a thin line of a plot, ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: Eddie and the Wolf, part 1
Hi , Felistia here with a review on your short story. Firstly, happy review day. The story: The story is a nice twist on the tale Little Red Riding Hood. ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: James. E. -Chapter 1-
Hi K4wa, Felistia here with a review on the first chapter of your novel. Firstly, happy review day. The story: The story has an interesting set up so far and ...
Nov 29, 2015
