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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Stars

    Hi Hadj, Felistia here with a short review on your poem. This is a pretty nice poem to read. I love that you set the stars to be a bit ...

    Dec 6, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Wonders of Winter

    Hi TheUnknownWriter, Felistia here with a review on your poem. First I must say that for a quick piece of work this is really good. I love that you made ...

    Dec 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: My Darkness

    Hi deathwave1, Felistia here with a review on your poem. I must say that I absolutely love this poem, it is so beautiful and full of emotion. This is what ...

    Dec 4, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: Train

    Hi godlypopo, Felistia here with a review on you short story. The story: I find the story a little confusing on the whole, especially in the beginning. It might just ...

    Dec 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: That's Just How it Goes

    Hi dogsrule5, Felistia here with a review on your poem. First love the concept, it is very inspiring to me. I picked up on some rhymes spotted through out the ...

    Dec 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: DIVINU: Chapters 12

    Hi Youngwriter724, Felistia here with the review you requested. Warning: I am not the best at romantic stories, so I might not be of any use, but I will try ...

    Dec 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Storm

    Hi rubykae, Felistia here with a review on your poem. Firstly I want to say that I didn't even notice the dots between your lines, so they weren't annoying to ...

    Dec 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Dragon Keeper Chapter 2

    Hi dogsrule5, Felistia here with a review on your novel. Warning: I am not trying to be mean, I am just trying to help and the review ahead is going ...

    Dec 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Dragon Keeper Chapter 1

    Hi dogsrule5, Felistia here with a review on the first chapter in your novel. Firstly I have to say that this about the perfect size for a first chapter. Story: ...

    Dec 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Dragon Keeper: Introduction

    Hi dogsrule5, Felistia here with a review on what I take as an introduction. So if this is the first chapter of your work please let me know because we ...

    Nov 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Giving Curse Chapter 2

    Hi Magestorrow, Felistia here with the review you requested on your story. I couldn't sleep so I decided to review your work. Story: You are developing the story well and ...

    Nov 30, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: night sky

    Hi rubykae, Felistia here with a review on your poem. Firstly, happy review day. The story: There isn't really a story the poem is more of a description really. I ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Realistic Re: The sea side reminiscence

    Hi Adreamer, Felistia here with a review on your short story. Firstly, happy review day. The story: There isn't really a story here, maybe a thin line of a plot, ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Eddie and the Wolf, part 1

    Hi , Felistia here with a review on your short story. Firstly, happy review day. The story: The story is a nice twist on the tale Little Red Riding Hood. ...

    Nov 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: James. E. -Chapter 1-

    Hi K4wa, Felistia here with a review on the first chapter of your novel. Firstly, happy review day. The story: The story has an interesting set up so far and ...

    Nov 29, 2015


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