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Re: The Satyr
So...this is certainly not my cup of tea, but I became interested in the story. You did a good job. You know, I should like to learn about mythology. As ...
Jun 9, 2015 -
Re: The Tale of Winterspell
Hi! I like what you have here. I do like the title. It is very captivating. What I like about this poem is the fantasy-isn plot, as I, myself, am ...
Jun 9, 2015 -
Re: Tiger Stripes: Prologue
Hello! Let me just say that I really enjoyed this prologue. This is a very good beginning to a story. What I liked about the story was---I have a few ...
Jun 7, 2015 -
Re: Every now and then I sit in silence.
Fantasy here! First, I just want to tell you that I love poetry and songs. Now, on to the important part. I found this song very humorous, especially the last ...
Jun 3, 2015 -
Re: you can touch the stars
Hey! I love poetry, and this one here was so good. It was so rhythmic. Everything was nice and smooth. I liked that. I also like how it was short, ...
Jun 2, 2015 -
Re: Mosquito
Hey! I like what you got here. It is quick, smooth, and not rough, as some poetry tend to be (my poetry). It rhymes well, maybe except for "makes" and ...
May 28, 2015 -
Re: Don't go
Fanta here! I like the way you wrote your poem. It was quick and smooth, and I did not see any mistakes. However, yes that big fat "however", I did ...
May 28, 2015 -
Re: The Mystery Of The Dog Ghost
Fanta here! I like this short story. It is short, sweet, and to the point. I love stories that are like that. I like your idea. It was very creative. ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: Love
Hi, it is me, fanta. I love this poem here. It tells about love. I find it so sweet, the poem. Everything just makes sense. Everything. It was nice and ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: Mother,my goddess
Fantasydragon01 here. I love this poem here. It is very touching. I love my mother dearly, and I think that all mothers have a huge responsibility in life. They deserve ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: CID ~ Case1 : The Mystery of killer Pen
Hey! It is me, fantasy dragon. I had followed your council and read the story while you watch the show. I like what you have here. It is very fast ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: Secret of The Emerald: Prologue
Fanta is here. I like what you got here. It is very captivating, as well as short, sweet, and to the point. I like that. If something is long, then ...
May 25, 2015 -
Re: When Youtube had a Problem!
Fantasydragon here! I must say that this is comical yet true. Why does the world have impure videos containing impure innuendoes?! *cries like crazy* Now, on to the critique. Well, ...
May 22, 2015 -
Re: Dreams
Fantasydragon01 in the house!!!!!! First off you did a fantastic job. I personally love songs, and you really nailed it! The whole thing is just so nice and sweet. I ...
May 19, 2015 -
Re: What Lies Beyond
Fantasydragon01 in the house!!!!!!!! I am a fan of poetry and songs. I am not just any fan, but a DIE-HARD fan of poetry. I like what you got here. ...
May 17, 2015
