Mother,my goddess

Fantasydragon01 here.
I love this poem here. It is very touching. I love my mother dearly, and I think that all mothers have a huge responsibility in life. They deserve a big, fat "thank you". It is a good that you wrote this. I hope this will inspire many.
Good job and keep writing!
Very truly yours,
fantasydragon01.

Well Divya, this is my first time to review a poem so I'll give it a shot. O
Oh and let me start off by saying that your profile pic is fantastic. Ok here we go.
Your title leads on to the general idea behind the poem, but still leaves us searching for what's in front if you will.
I think my favorite aspect to this is the way the poem builds upon itself.
For example

"She is as strong as a mountain,"
good simile
Then you further your explanation with

"Just as a mountain that blocks the obstacles,"

"She too blocks the obstacles and protects her children;"

Piling the same little words on top of each other makes a mountain (lol) of description which I'm sure is what you were going for but I really like it. Very easy to read and as you read it this way it seems to flow in the mind with good steady rhythm.

The sentiment is great and I'm in tears because all mothers should know that their children see them like you do.

Very well written
Very organized
Very beautiful

Hi divya!

This is Eros here!!

It was really a great poem.It was all about Mother.The poem is full of great feelings. It is a small poem devoted to Mother.It is a sweet poem with an in - depth meaning.It is really a beautiful poem.
you have an art of writing.You are one of the most talented creation of God. You should be really proud. I salute to your great work.I loved reading your poem.It was a poem with a depth which drowned me in it..
Continue writing Dear Divya!
We will continue loving your stuff and poetry.....

this is a good piece and it expresses your heart filled emotions. but i would like to do a few nitpicks however-
"mom" in the first line sounds a little odd. i assume here you are trying to add a personal to your work but all mothers are almost the same. i suggest you use " mother" instead, that also makes your poem sound defining a particular category.
"She is like a soldier who fights for her children,", i think using "child" in place of children would be more appropriate as each individual child is treated by a mother with same love
"Like a flower that beautifies a plant,
She is like a flower that beautifies her children,", i get what you mean but at places your thoughts are disconnected. you can rather put this line as "as a flower that beautifies a plans,
she is that very one who beautifies us"
"Like a plant that needs sunlight,
Her children too need her,"i find a similar error here as i told just in the previous place, i suggest you write " a plant needs sunlight to grow,
to us she is the sun which we need"
sorry is i am a bit rude, i am here after long so kind of lost touch.
you have potential and a few refining would make you good to sail fair,
keep writing
Rituparna

Hi, Divya!

This is a great poem, structurally and idea-wise. It's so great, actually, that I'm gonna have to nitpick a bit. Is that okay?

Title: Mother, My Goddess is a beautiful title. Only thing is, try to watch out for capitalization, etc. There should be a space between words and capitalized first letters. Also, commas in titles can sometimes be a little confusing. I'd recommend a good colon.

Line by line:

Mom, the epitome of love,

A creation by god,

She is as strong as a mountain,

She is like a soldier who fights for her children,

Maybe fire is weaker than her

Only to give but not take;

Like a flower that beautifies a plant,

She is like a flower that beautifies her children

But through her deeds she becomes immortal...