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hey there JohnLocke1, it's dramamine here to give a quick review so here goes nothing! Even though repetition is the whole point of this poem, I feel like you go ...

Hey there plantlady, it's dramamine here to give a quick review so let's dive right in. I think the best poems come from raw, unfiltered thoughts and feelings. That's exactly ...

hey there Asahi18, i've just stopped by to give a quick review of your poem so here goes nothing. first off, even though the poem itself is very short, each ...

Hey there Silberfee, it's dramamine here for a review! Okay to begin, I thought this was a sweet poem with a lot of potential. Only some of your word choices ...

Hey BlueRoses15! It's your friend dramamine here for a quick review. (sorry i haven't messaged you in a long time, i hope you're doing okay) Firstly, I would have to ...

Hey there herbgirl! I'm dramamine and I'll be giving you a quick review today, so here we go. Well first off all, there is absolutely no reason to hate this ...

Hey there, it's dramamine here for a review. Okay so I'm going to be brutally honest here in saying that this poem really didn't make me feel anything at all. ...

Hey there Casanova, it's dramamine here to review. Okay, meaningless introductions aside, I would firstly like to address what I liked in this poem. So you have a good thing ...

Hey there herbgirl, I'm dramamine and I guess this is part where I start my review (I'm a bit rusty so I apologize if my review makes no sense) First ...

Hi, I'm dramamine and I guess this is the part where I begin to review your lovely poem. Firstly, I think this poem contains some truly wonderful imagery. I also ...

Hey there, I'm dramamine and I guess this is the part where I start my review (be warned though I haven't reviewed in a while so I'm a bit rusty). ...

I personally can't relate to this piece very much but I did truly enjoy reading it. The only thing I would suggest doing is breaking it into stanzas to make ...

I have never been in a situation like yours but I can only imagine how hard it is to be in the midst of this. I admire you for trying ...

I really like this poem. I love how it almost could read as a short story and your excellent descriptions. Much as others have said, it would certainly help if ...

This is a nice little poem with a good rhyme scheme to it. It flows properly and is well written. While not being the most creative or thought-provoking piece out ...