dbrick

Hey! I really liked this poem. It carried a flow of deep imagery that really spoke to me. I like how you didn't explicitly explain the poem but rather left ...

Hey, Dbrick here for a review! Congrats by the way, it looks like this is your first poem on YWS. I like the rhyming in this poem, it isn't the ...

What a great poem! The lines themselves are complex and carry a lot of weight. I especially loved the format of the poem, it is new and interesting. The analogy ...

This was a good essay; you communicated your position well and talked about many of the aspects of homosexuality. I do have a problem with your reasoning though; you said ...

I am not that familiar with many of Shakespeare's works, but I will review this as best I can. This is such a great poem! I love the imagery of ...

I really liked this poem; it is so charged with emotion! First what I liked: I didn't see any particular rhyming pattern yet this poem flows very well. Many of ...

Hey dbrick here for a review! The flow of your poem was really great, especially considering the poem had varying long and short sentences. Your words usage was great as ...

This was a good poem! I really like poems that tell a story, and your poem about the zombie apocalypse is unique. Your description of the zombies/environment/yourself really brings this ...

Hey! I really liked this poem. This is a great reminder of what the little gestures in life can do! I remember when I helped an older lady find her ...

This poem was so well done and really paints a picture of the mental progression of depression. The imagery was beautiful and puts a twist on the beautiful sunny ocean ...

Hey! I really liked this, it was simple but clever and it had a good flow to it. I wrote a similar poem when I had writer's block; it was ...

This is a riveting poem that carried a sad tune. Your word use was eloquent and the rhyming worked great. Like Ibounce said, "her paper skin, her inky heart" was ...

What an interesting concept! This poem reminded me of Inception. Your poem flowed well considering that you seemed to transition from a dream about a lover to a dream within ...

This is a simple but interesting poem. I was about to critique you about having a contradiction "Change is hard but its not fatal, yet its killing me." But after ...

Hey, another review from dbrick! This poem was simple and made an intriguing connection between an earthquake and a lion (I think). It was a little bit unpolished (some of ...