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dalisay

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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Early fall

    This poem has some of the best flow I have ever seen. I'm no good at rhyming in poems (I'm more free verse) but I was reading this and my ...

    Feb 9, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Apple Tree

    I love the symbolism used in this poem. Relationships should always be a give and take kind of deal and this poem show symbolism through an apple tree of a ...

    Feb 9, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Tick

    ♡ Hello there! ♡ I'm Dalisay and I'm here to review this poem! Application / Initial Thoughts I felt, after reading this, a feeling of oblivion? I don't know why ...

    Nov 6, 2017
  • Art » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Eyes

    omg i am trash at writing, well, writing reviews but i am OBSESSED with art. (so dont mind me digging deep in this i have an art wired brain) I ...

    Nov 2, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Two Sides

    okay first off I ADORE this poem so much. I read it and it got a Ying Yang kind of vibe from reading it. The italics from the sun and ...

    May 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Girl With Daisies in Her Hair

    I have a short little review for this so here we go! I loved this poem overall because I personally just went through some things this poem touches on and ...

    May 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: eating bubbles

    hey there honey pie just felt like this poem was too adorable NOT to review so here you go! Things about the poem I LOVED - the format of this ...

    May 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Literature, Lyrical Re: A Black Girl's Tale (edited)

    Hey there! This poem caught my eye so I thought I'd read and review it! One of my favorite lines was: it doesn’t matter anyway you heard there was an ...

    May 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Science Re: doctor

    aye rosey (soon to be honeymoon ;) ) I just wanted to take the time to dissect this beauty of a poem. (I'm lame sorry ON WITH THE REVIEW: My ...

    Apr 7, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: honeymoon

    Aye Rose...I need to get back into reviewing and I thought "HEY...WHY NOT REVIEW ONE OF MY FRIENDS TO GET BACK IN THE SWING OF THINGS..." and then I thought ...

    Mar 22, 2017
  • Poetry » Politics, Culture Re: We are the same.

    Personally, I absolutely loved reading this poem! The message is so powerful and reading it in the middle of all that is going on allows many to relate and understand ...

    Feb 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Devotion

    Hey there! I’m here to review your beautiful poem. While reading this, I felt myself easily relating to this, making this poem easy to relate to adds to the interest ...

    Dec 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Please

    Hey there! This is my first review in a LONG time so, I'll give it my best shot! Okay so overall I LOVED this poem. It shows amazing imagery and ...

    Nov 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Destroy the monster - song / poem

    Hey there! I'm pretty new at reviewing so bare with me. :3 In this song / poem, I loved the feeling of hopeless and losing will to fight switch suddenly ...

    May 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Politics, Romantic Re: Women

    Hey there! This is only my second review so, sorry if I'm not very good at this. Still getting the hang of things : 3 First off, this poem is ...

    May 9, 2016


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