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Re: My Sunflower
I loved this short story! It was so cute and beautiful! I’m glad they ended up together! I also loved the descriptions you provided for the characters,especially the “starry-eyed girl” ...
Nov 10, 2021 -
Re: hot Chocolate
Cool little story about hot chocolate! First of all,I want to say that looks like a delicious cup of hot chocolate.Second,the details here are clear and precise.You were listing many ...
Nov 9, 2021 -
Re: i am always writing about stars
This was short,but it was nice to read.I liked it.I believe that this poem is about someone who is troubled and anxious,yet,they don’t want help,because their loneliness inspires their creativity.If
Nov 8, 2021 -
Re: A letter to the devil
This was a fun poem to read.Yes,we do blame the devil for most of our problems,but what is the devil’s story? What does he have to say? We ask ourselves ...
Nov 7, 2021 -
Re: The Barnacles on a Whale
Such a sad and emotional poem to read.I can’t imagine how upset and devastated the mother must have felt to leave her child and knowing that she’ll never see her ...
Nov 6, 2021 -
Re: hometown anarchy
I enjoyed reading this poem.This talks about how people can be forgotten from the world,fading away into nothingness.Everyone wants to be heard,but not everyone is heard.People are lost and are ...
Nov 5, 2021 -
Re: if i am human, i am one of the worst
Ooh..I liked this teaches us that we have so much we need to learn about life in general,it tells us that we need a greater understanding of the world and ...
Nov 4, 2021 -
Re: Pieces
I liked reading this poem! It’s relatable.Sometimes,we all feel like we’re going to break into pieces with the expectations the world puts on us,even if we keep on trying.We’ll still ...
Nov 3, 2021 -
Re: I am a Rose
This is a lovely little story from the perspective of a rose.This rose holds so many wishes and hopes for love,but it’s all drained and there is nothing left.The rose ...
Nov 2, 2021 -
Re: twin waves
I like this collaboration! The two poems put together sound wonderful.I love the lines:”I want a better life and so I’m cast away.” The narrator gets pushed away from a ...
Nov 1, 2021 -
Re: dandelion scream
This was a nice short poem I read.”Dandelions screaming”…is that supposed to represent the people in this world who ask-scream-for help,but never get any? Because people wish on dandelions,pluck
Oct 31, 2021 -
Re: packing list for a trip i won't return from
This is a cool poem,so liked this poem,it was beautiful.I feel like this is talking about the emotions when leaving something familiar,like home.You don’t want to leave home,but sometimes,you have ...
Oct 30, 2021 -
Re: The Geode
Cool poem.I wonder if this is a toxic relationship that won’t end well.The reference of:”..until the whole thing rumbled like a stomach and cracked at the seams and crumbled over ...
Oct 29, 2021 -
Re: Ants
This was a fun story to read.I wonder if there is more to it,though.What if-this is probably off topic-the house was haunted and it wasn’t just something simple,like having ants ...
Oct 28, 2021 -
Re: Trick Or Treat
Cute and creepy! I had such a kick reading this little poem.It’s a nice thing to read for Halloween.I also like the question at the end,addressing the readers.”Who will be ...
Oct 27, 2021
