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Re: Meditation as a Conversation
Ah yes,meditation.Not many of us have time for meditation,with everything that happens in our lives.If we see meditation as something necessary,like a meeting,then we’ll have time for it.I loved rea
Dec 15, 2021 -
Re: Born by the Spindle
I enjoyed this poem.I like how it talks about how we all want something in our lives,but never take time to enjoy it.We’re always craving for something faster and better.We ...
Dec 14, 2021 -
Re: Water Poems: Mind-map (or Things a River Asks)
I like this poem and how the river is personified.I believe that this poem is talking about the wishes of a river and wanting to be praised as much as ...
Dec 12, 2021 -
Re: The Last Day of Autumn
This was a very nice and lovely poem about autumn.The part where you mentioned that you were inspired to write this poem just by looking out the the train window ...
Dec 11, 2021 -
Re: Alone
Nice poem to read.I do feel like this sometimes when I write and I’ll feel lonely.Personally,I’d try to find a way to get to know people while also giving myself ...
Dec 10, 2021 -
Re: Pitter-Patter
I enjoyed the poem.I thought that it was beautiful and relatable.Sometimes,the soft pitter-patter of the rain is all that we need.Especially if you have nice book next to you.I myself ...
Dec 10, 2021 -
Re: Friendship
I enjoyed reading this wholesome poem about friendship.All this narrator wants us a good and honest friend,nothing more.We don’t get that very often.Usually,people will want something from us.This p
Dec 9, 2021 -
Re: Masih
I liked this poem.That was very meaningful to me because it talks about Caesar’s warriors and how they fought for good and the very importance of their was a powerful,descriptive ...
Dec 8, 2021 -
Re: The Woes of Perpetually Fleeting Intrigue
Lovely and dramatic story to read! It could just be a simple story about someone wanting to swim,like fish,but it could also be about someone being attacked by the rest ...
Dec 7, 2021 -
Re: Dinner Date
This was a fun poem to read.Yes,relationships can feel complicated,strained and practiced at times,but if you really trust,love and know the person,then everything will be free and alright.The poem it
Dec 5, 2021 -
Re: Emerald Eyes
I loved this short story.This person,fascinated by the cat,must mean something to the narrator.You mentioned that the cat was the only thing left of the narrator’s wife.Maybe the wife had ...
Dec 4, 2021 -
Re: Brain Vomit
That was a realistic,sad and emotional poem I read.Life can get hard and you might be tempted to end it,but no matter what,you’ll always have the courage to live,because there ...
Dec 3, 2021 -
Re: The Missionary's Folly
I enjoyed reading this poem! It made me wonder,could people suffer at the hands of God? Are they suffering because they have misused Earth? Is the world watching us,taking note ...
Dec 3, 2021 -
Re: I'm Insane
Oooh…cool poem about losing sanity,but then again,the narrator probably never had any.I love how you changed the punctuation of the poem to emphasize the narrator’s perspective on the narrator tal
Dec 2, 2021 -
Re: Mother Earth
This is a very true poem,Earth offered life to us and as humans,we took it.We humans can be cruel to life at times.This was something nice and short to read.But ...
Nov 30, 2021
