Wow, I love how descriptive and rich in imagery this poem is. It's beautiful how you've captured a sad truth in splendid word-play. I think the repetition adds a strong touch and reiterates how terrible we have been in our treatment of Mother Earth.
"With the first handshake of autumn,
the leaves' tense whisper"
I'm going to remember these lines for a long time. Thank you for sharing!
-D
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