Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
Pour me some wine and let me be filled
Fill the cup with playfulness and joy
Joy so full that I get drunk
Drunk in love in a 'ship
Ship we sail till Earth's end
Play me some fine music to the ear
Ears will be rhythm full
Full at heart with love
Love that sings David and Jonathan
Jonathan, leave me not
Read me some fine words worthwhile
Worthwhile like the ink of this
This reality will never end
End to all games and gall
Gall won't,with you, spoil supper
Give me some kisses to my wounds
Wounds that only you can heal
Heal me with your kind words
Words that will ring in my heart forever
Forever we will be friends
I was just searching around for a random work to review and this one really caught my eye here. Its a little old and I'm not usually one to review poetry but this one seemed to really resonate with me when I read so I thought I should leave a little review with how my impression of it. Its such a simple little topic to talk about but one that has so many other facets to it and I think its a beautiful way you've chosen to bring it all out onto the table in this particular piece here.
Its not as joyous as one would initially think from the general tone of it and several lines indicate things aren't so great and these friends are just trying to survive together with each other more than thrive even though we have such moments and I think that's quite beautiful. Often its forgotten sometimes how much impact hard times can have and being able to heal each other's wounds and that part especially resonated with me. This feels like a beautiful little list of everything that symbolizes a lovely friendship just brought together as one and laid out with the simple message of how a connection that powerful and loving can be sustained forever and how it sustains everyone involved when its shared so beautifully.
I don't know if that is quite what you intended for this poem to say but its what it says to me and I thought it was a beautiful read.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.