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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Alone

    Nice poem to read.I do feel like this sometimes when I write and I’ll feel lonely.Personally,I’d try to find a way to get to know people while also giving myself ...

    Dec 10, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Pitter-Patter

    I enjoyed the poem.I thought that it was beautiful and relatable.Sometimes,the soft pitter-patter of the rain is all that we need.Especially if you have nice book next to you.I myself ...

    Dec 10, 2021
  • Article / Essay » Other, General Re: Friendship

    I enjoyed reading this wholesome poem about friendship.All this narrator wants us a good and honest friend,nothing more.We don’t get that very often.Usually,people will want something from us.This p

    Dec 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Masih

    I liked this poem.That was very meaningful to me because it talks about Caesar’s warriors and how they fought for good and the very importance of their was a powerful,descriptive ...

    Dec 8, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: The Woes of Perpetually Fleeting Intrigue

    Lovely and dramatic story to read! It could just be a simple story about someone wanting to swim,like fish,but it could also be about someone being attacked by the rest ...

    Dec 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Dinner Date

    This was a fun poem to read.Yes,relationships can feel complicated,strained and practiced at times,but if you really trust,love and know the person,then everything will be free and alright.The poem it

    Dec 5, 2021
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Emerald Eyes

    I loved this short story.This person,fascinated by the cat,must mean something to the narrator.You mentioned that the cat was the only thing left of the narrator’s wife.Maybe the wife had ...

    Dec 4, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Brain Vomit

    That was a realistic,sad and emotional poem I read.Life can get hard and you might be tempted to end it,but no matter what,you’ll always have the courage to live,because there ...

    Dec 3, 2021
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: The Missionary's Folly

    I enjoyed reading this poem! It made me wonder,could people suffer at the hands of God? Are they suffering because they have misused Earth? Is the world watching us,taking note ...

    Dec 3, 2021
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: I'm Insane

    Oooh…cool poem about losing sanity,but then again,the narrator probably never had any.I love how you changed the punctuation of the poem to emphasize the narrator’s perspective on the narrator tal

    Dec 2, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mother Earth

    This is a very true poem,Earth offered life to us and as humans,we took it.We humans can be cruel to life at times.This was something nice and short to read.But ...

    Nov 30, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Her everything

    This was a nice poem to read.It’s so real,you really put your emotion to it.Yes,often as humans,we do rely on others heavily,you’re right about that.But when we put every fiber ...

    Nov 29, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Curiosity

    Lovely poem! We do often warn others about being “too curious”,don’t we? It’s not good, because curiosity is what makes this world go round.You’re right about there being a difference ...

    Nov 28, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Candle Melting

    Wow! What a sweet poem! It shows the love that is out there in the world.I sure hope the old woman and her child grow to have a lovely relationship ...

    Nov 27, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: i've gotten worse // since we last spoke

    I imagine that this poem is about revisiting horrible memories and wanting to escape your past,but being unable to,because the memories are overwhelming.You can’t escape them no matter what.You can

    Nov 26, 2021


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