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  • Poetry » General, General Re: They answer my questions with confident lies

    This is actually a very cool and unique poem.I think this poem could be about people who already have answers in their head that they don’t even think about.They just ...

    Jan 13, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Tired

    This was very descriptive and detailed.How you talk about being afraid to fall asleep,because of these cascading thoughts.All I have to say for that is to breathe and relax when ...

    Jan 12, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Satire Re: Poetry Compilation #1

    I liked all three of the poems.They were descriptive and had lovely imagery.They all had their own charm and imagery to them.I think my favorite poem was the second had ...

    Jan 12, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Health Re: Explaining Emetophobia

    I liked this poem.The way you wrote it brings a sense of fear in the poem.Like we’re you,the author,experiencing your phobias.Yes,I do agree that a phobia is much more than ...

    Jan 10, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Tree of Life

    Ooh..I love the imagery in the was so descriptive.I could picture all of this in my mind,like a movie.I also liked the style of the font.The text you used in ...

    Jan 9, 2022
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: gaunt

    Ooh..I loved this poem.The way you wrote it made it look like the person was slowly descending into insanity.I also loved the way you described it.I feel like the narrator ...

    Jan 8, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wooden Planks Floating

    This poetically describes how we didn’t think much of this pandemic,how we were so first,people thought that it would only last a week and nothing more.What a surprise when we ...

    Jan 7, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Freedom

    This is intresting,to hear the thoughts of someone who is dying.The feeling of never going to be able to go back to the people you love,the feeling of being disconnected ...

    Jan 6, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Elevator Music

    This was a nicd short poem to read.Sometimes,it does feel like we are going nowhere admist our wants and will feel like being stuck in an elevator that leads to ...

    Jan 5, 2022
  • Poetry » Humor, Mystery / Suspense Re: Gift from an angel

    I enjoyed reading this poem about angels and the gift of life.The fact that people hate this angel makes so much sense,because we are taught that wanting stuff and having ...

    Jan 4, 2022
  • Poetry » Science, General Re: Water Poems: Flowchart

    I liked reading this piece.The way the words were laid out gave the poem so much more impact and meaning.When the word “nothing“ is read,you can feel the nothingness from ...

    Jan 3, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Catastrophic Pain

    I love the way you described the feelings and pain the solider is going through as he walks among a matter who wins,in the end,a war is still a war.People ...

    Jan 2, 2022
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Reunion

    I loved the details and imagery from the poem.The descriptions you used were magical and was fairy-tale does feel like a childhood memory with your descriptions.It’s how we all imagine ...

    Jan 1, 2022
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: A Piece of My Mind

    I loved reading this poem! I can relate,I do stay awake at night with ideas.But how can anyone not? The inspiration comes late at night,when no one else is around ...

    Dec 31, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Green is not always green

    I’d say this poem could be about change and how we can’t’ always stop things from happening.We are the fish,fighting change,which is the ducks and the pond is the world,changing.Sometimes,it’s

    Dec 30, 2021


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