This is gem for a review.
I enjoyed this poem, it was a very emotional and feeling peice and I know the numb feeling or at least my version of it. The poem reads for me as a person in a depressive state a tiredness mental and physical kind of drifting of into a stream of thought. This poem embodies dissasociation and it resonates. The stylistic choices of grammar and capitalization work pretty well with the poem. I do not see any grammatical errors. Though, I am curious how would this look:
The poem seems to move and I would love to see that highlighted.
Have a nice day/night. Keep writing. Much love, CoffeeGemini <3333333
Points: 33
Reviews: 105
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