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  • Poetry » Narrative, Narrative Re: Do less

    Hello there! cleverclogs here to drop a... Review Day review! So, let's begin. :) I really enjoyed the message that this poem gives, but I feel like it's lacking something. ...

    Jun 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Politics Re: Homeless Hope

    Hi there, GeeLyria! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! I love the sentiment that your poem gives to the readers. It's awesomely powerful and also so true. I also ...

    Jun 28, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Give A little more Take a little less

    Hello there! cleverclogs here for a... Review Day review! This is a great sentiment. I can relate to it so much. It really states the feelings that I have trouble ...

    Jun 28, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, Humor Re: EYEronic

    Hello there! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! This is hilarious. I am also a glasses wearer, and have been since about second grade, so I can totally relate ...

    Jun 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Spiritual Re: What if...

    Hello there, and welcome to YWS! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! This is my lasting impression of your poem: So...many....ellipses... Seriously. I second Strange's sentiment that this dubiou

    Jun 28, 2015
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: In Footies We Are All Made Equal

    Hello there! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! This is funny to me not because of the notion that footies make us equal, but because of how you presented ...

    Jun 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Morning Of

    Hello there! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! This will probably be a rather short review, as there's not much for me to critique here. :P I really like ...

    Jun 28, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Airplane

    Hello there! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! This story was very heartwarming. My mom also loves airplanes, and while she never became a pilot, she's always on the ...

    Jun 28, 2015
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Fanfiction Re: Goblet of fire Song

    Hello there, ChocolateCello (I play the viola btw)! Welcome to YWS! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! This is great. Right from the beginning, it had me laughing. It's ...

    Jun 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: The Lion and The Lamb

    Hello there, and welcome to YWS! cleverclogs here for a review! First of all, I really like the name Raylan. I'm pretty much the queen of choosing unoriginal names for ...

    Jun 27, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Me

    Hello there, and welcome to YWS! cleverclogs here to review! I'm going to jump right in and start with punctuation and capitalization. I'm not good at numbers. But i know ...

    Jun 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: How to not fall for that guy

    Hello, there! cleverclogs here for a review! I like the premise of the girl asking her mother about her first love, and I like how you convey that to the ...

    Jun 24, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Alexandra and Natalie

    I saw this post on your wall: Please be brutally honest with my actually helps me develop better writing Well, buckle up, because I've got a lot of suggestions for ...

    Jun 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Lemon Custard

    Hello there! cleverclogs here to review! I like the simplistic structure and how it fits the light tone of the poem. The rhyme scheme is also fun and pleasing to ...

    Jun 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Questioning Love

    Hello there, cleverclogs here to review! I just spent a good twenty minutes writing a review for this work, and then my computer ate it, so I apologize if I ...

    Jun 13, 2015


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