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Re: Do less
Hello there! cleverclogs here to drop a... Review Day review! So, let's begin. :) I really enjoyed the message that this poem gives, but I feel like it's lacking something. ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: Homeless Hope
Hi there, GeeLyria! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! I love the sentiment that your poem gives to the readers. It's awesomely powerful and also so true. I also ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: Give A little more Take a little less
Hello there! cleverclogs here for a... Review Day review! This is a great sentiment. I can relate to it so much. It really states the feelings that I have trouble ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: EYEronic
Hello there! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! This is hilarious. I am also a glasses wearer, and have been since about second grade, so I can totally relate ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: What if...
Hello there, and welcome to YWS! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! This is my lasting impression of your poem: So...many....ellipses... Seriously. I second Strange's sentiment that this dubiou
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: In Footies We Are All Made Equal
Hello there! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! This is funny to me not because of the notion that footies make us equal, but because of how you presented ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: The Morning Of
Hello there! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! This will probably be a rather short review, as there's not much for me to critique here. :P I really like ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: Airplane
Hello there! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! This story was very heartwarming. My mom also loves airplanes, and while she never became a pilot, she's always on the ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: Goblet of fire Song
Hello there, ChocolateCello (I play the viola btw)! Welcome to YWS! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! This is great. Right from the beginning, it had me laughing. It's ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: The Lion and The Lamb
Hello there, and welcome to YWS! cleverclogs here for a review! First of all, I really like the name Raylan. I'm pretty much the queen of choosing unoriginal names for ...
Jun 27, 2015 -
Re: Me
Hello there, and welcome to YWS! cleverclogs here to review! I'm going to jump right in and start with punctuation and capitalization. I'm not good at numbers. But i know ...
Jun 27, 2015 -
Re: How to not fall for that guy
Hello, there! cleverclogs here for a review! I like the premise of the girl asking her mother about her first love, and I like how you convey that to the ...
Jun 24, 2015 -
Re: Alexandra and Natalie
I saw this post on your wall: Please be brutally honest with my actually helps me develop better writing Well, buckle up, because I've got a lot of suggestions for ...
Jun 15, 2015 -
Re: Lemon Custard
Hello there! cleverclogs here to review! I like the simplistic structure and how it fits the light tone of the poem. The rhyme scheme is also fun and pleasing to ...
Jun 15, 2015 -
Re: Questioning Love
Hello there, cleverclogs here to review! I just spent a good twenty minutes writing a review for this work, and then my computer ate it, so I apologize if I ...
Jun 13, 2015
