candrew

Hello! I am Candrew. There is a reason I clicked on this poem. The way your description of the poem was what caught my eye. I will be honest, I, ...

Hey there. First, I understand what "hist'ry" means, but why did you put it that way? The same with "fam'lies", I just don't get it. I would like to say ...

Hi, candrew here. First, a haiku goes five syllables, then seven, then five again. Your haiku goes four syllables, then five, then ten. Technically this isn't even a haiku anymore. ...

Hey, candrew here. First I'd like to say that if you have a game boy color, you are AWESOME!!!! I thought that this limerick was clever and simple. Though it's ...

Hello LordGreenleaf. First, I'm confused on what this is about. By what you said "And throw away all those, Chains and restraints.", it made it sound like he/she in in ...

Hello. I think I get what your saying. From what I get from this story, the "Modern Day Wicked Witch" is a hot and sexy 20 year-old chick that when ...

Hello there BitterRosemary. I just got done singing this song in my head. One thing I noticed is that this song can be very dark. When I read these lyrics ...

Hello there. First I would like to say that even though every haiku is three lines, you gave them meaning. I say that because in my head you just put ...

Hello, it's Candrew. For what I just read, you are amazing. Plus your only twelve, you have talent. I don't understand something though. Are you supposed to be a zombie ...

Hi I'm candrew. That was really good. One thing I did notice though is that you put this as romantic. I was Just wondering if there was something in your ...

Hi SecreteJournalist. That was really good. Did you write this because people have been trying to bring you down? I LOVED it! You have real talent and you should use ...

Hey I'm Candrew. First, way too many people. Second, FREAKY! Third, LOVED it! I couldn't have come up with that if I watched every paranormal movie there was. It was ...

Hi I'm Candrew. That was really good. One thing I noticed though was that when you kept saying "she fell she stood up" some of them had commas or periods ...

Hi there, I'm Candrew. I read over the lyrics and then(you might think I'm a dork) I sang them aloud. I don't know the way you meant the rhythm to ...

Hi I'm Candrew. Wow, that was really good. It took you five minutes to write that? That would have taken me like five hours to write that. what I want ...