camillefalgout

Okay I didn't see any big problems with this poem... but I looove the idea of it! Saying things we do even though nothing huge comes out of it and ...

Okay I love this poem. It is short, but I really understand it. Like I really love what it is about!!! The only thing is I think you meant to ...

This is a short but very powerful poem. I like how you rhyme the beginning, and then stop rhyming at the end to make it dramatic. My only suggestion is ...

I looove this poem! I like the topic of America because lots of people can relate to it. I liked how you used repetition, it brought the poem together. I ...

This is a really meaningful poem. I have only a few suggestions. First, I think a better rhyming word wold sound better with "presentation" and "attention". Also, paper and later ...

Wow, one of my favorite kinds of poems are "I Am" poems...! They are so heartfelt and they allow you to express yourself and let others know a little more ...

This isnt a very short story... thats why I like it!! I am in highschool, and there are obviously many highschool students so I think it was a great idea ...

Wow this is a very serious poem.. i like it a lot! I like how you use the colors to explain things like black and a gun.. and I definetely ...

I love how there is a lot of mystery in this piece.. it makes it all the more interesting! Also, I like how your verses are not straightforward, so that ...

Before we talk about the story, I love how you made it a mystery of whether she did it... or maybe not just by the description.. it makes it sound ...

This poem is so deep, and so true. I applaud you for it! I absolutely love how this truly explains life, or else I feel that it does! I really ...

This poem is very heartfelt. I like how you wrote it as almost a tribute to him, but you still incorporate yourself into it. I also love how you keep ...

Wow this is a great poem! I like how you use detailed descriptions, and I see some imagery as well, I can definitely picture some things from this poem. I ...

I really liked this poem. The topic of war is a good topic (even though war is not good) you gave the reader a good viewpoint of war. I like ...

I really like this poem, I mean you doesn't like pillows...! The line "You're my chubby little angel" is so great, I like how you describe a pillow that way! ...