I really like this poem, I mean you doesn't like pillows...! The line "You're my chubby little angel" is so great, I like how you describe a pillow that way! I also love how you describe how the pillow holds your dreams and how dreams are, it is very descriptive! My favorite is when you describe crying and secrets, it brings a deep feeling to the end. I love this piece keep up the good work!
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