This wasn't deep.
I don't like when people have egos in poetry. That's something that gets on my nerves. Yes, cool, you so know what we're doing wrong in life. It seems like the narrator is saying that they're way better than everybody else. Why do you have to say that? It feels unnecessary, really. It's only insulting to the reader and it doesn't make you look good. I do like the question set up and the flow of the lines, but it's the personality I don't like. I'm going to look in my mirror and realize that I'm still the same.
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