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"He said it again, this time in her mind. No. " Firas off, I just want to say how much I am enjoying this story. Always ,putting me on the ...

0.0 WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!! I absolutly enjoyed this. It is exciting and adventorous, something I love. The only thing I have to say is that perhaps you could have explained ...

Wow! I really enjoy reading this story. I love the fact that I feel like I am really, truly there! I feel like I am truly Donna. So far, I ...

I know this is going to sounds weird. But this remionds me alot of pokemon. Good job sofar. I enjoy reading. I hope you keep up the amazing work. This ...

Wow. I love the way you started this was such simple, happy, calm guestures. But then in the end you ended with:The windows rattled harder. A shadow was cast on ...

Wow. This is so moving an powerful. I can fill the dark energy radiating off of it. I especially like this seciotn :The burning, the screaming the cries to be ...

This is such a bittersweet story.I completly understand, because my dad joined the milkktary when I was born. He has already been deployed, and I was terrified that he would ...

And you just came up with this while you were bored? I loved this, and I like how the car crash was ddescribed. I perosnally like to feel like I ...

I personally love the length on this poem. It stops at the perfect pint, which shows very good skill. Sometimes it is difficult to stop, then it becomes a mumbo ...

I enjoyed reading this. I found that it could hold so many meanings, like that people push you around, using your emotions for there own success. Or that you think ...

I am going to tell you the truth. I just cried. This is such an amazing beautiful piece of work, accentuating how ungrateful some are, and how they do not ...

I enjoyed this poem. I also always feel like I want to just jump up and fly away and soar far away from my troubles. The only criticism I have, ...

I absolutely love this poem :). I am quite the procrastinator myself, and this describes the feelings I have during its process completely! It shows how so many of us ...

I love how this portrays everyday life. It reminds me how I feel when I see mirrors. I like how you said that it " may be a bit distorted". ...

Let me say this. It was absolutley amazing how you could make me feel like I was the poem. I could just feel the walls closing in around me, barely ...