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Hey, Shine. I'm Nonny. I'm going to split up your poem into small sections, review it and then re-cap at the end. Heart Racing.... to Please? To me it seems ...

Hey, Run. I'm Nonny! Happy Review Day :) I'm gonna divide the poem up into how many verses it had and review each of them separately, then the whole poem ...

Hey, Shalmz. I'm Nonny! Happy Review Day :) If you're on a team, may the best team win. If you're not, enjoy the reviews! I'm going to divide the poem ...

Hey, Bookworm. My name is Nonny and I'm going to be reviewing your piece. It was pretty short, so this is probably going to be a short review. I'll start ...

I really liked this. The title drew me in, like others have stated. No one thinks of a father having a womb but if you really look at it, your ...

Hey, Lylas. I find complete truth in those words as well. A first love will always be there, in your heart....crushing it. Now that I know the truth about this ...

Hey, Lylas. First review here and it's probably going to be a short one considering this is a very short chapter. I wish it was a little longer. I think ...

Hey, Cadi. I'm Nonny and I'm going to go ahead and reveiw your poem 'Commuting is'. I like to go by verse so I'll go ahead and start: 1st verse: ...

Hello again, soulfulwriter. I did a review on your other piece and decided to come back and read a bit more of your work. I noticed you're new to YWS ...

Hello, Lylas. I'm Nonny! This is the first work of yours that I'm reading and I will be sure to go and read others because this is beautiful. I wrote ...

Hey, SoulfulWriter. I'm Nonny and I'm going to go ahead and leave ya a quick review. Most of the other people have let comments on grammar and other things they ...

Hey, AbsolutelyNot. I'm Nonny and I'm going to review your first chapter here. I read some other chapters and they touched on most of the things that I want to ...

Hey, musiklover. I'll split my review into multiple peices like verses. During the first part of your poem, I think that if your poem is about how people come into ...

Hey, Skye. The first three paragraphs really set up the rest of the story, I feel. I felt my heart shifting a little in my chest while reading the first ...

Hey, heavymetal. I enjoyed reading this chapter of yours and I did read the prologue before I came here, in order to get some insight on the story itself. I ...