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Re: Tell Her I was not Scared; Tell Him I know he was Brave
Heya, This is poem is magnificent in its way and it moved me. Exceptionally good. Such respect and love the poet feels in the lines are felt when they're read. ...
Oct 22, 2021 -
Re: happier
Wow! Text messages in form of poetry. Unique piece of work. Reading the little I thought I'm going to read about happiness, Clever way of handling the words, I was ...
May 30, 2020 -
Re: Was it love?
Heyo, Like your username your work does sparkle. I found it moving. The rhyme scheme was smooth. While reading I was put at ease and yeah it has a beautiful ...
May 27, 2020 -
Re: Sorry love
Hey, Pal! This is poem is magnificent in its way. The rhyme scheme didn't seem to be forced. It was smooth and paved for an amazing read. The reader could ...
Feb 23, 2020 -
Re: Saw you die
Hey, Vagrant! This lyrics of yours is deeply emotional. The tone of the lyricist is sincere, longing and powerful. With every rhetorical question there it made my heart sink When ...
Feb 23, 2020 -
Re: In the Halls
Hey, @tgham99! This poem of yours is profound and a powerful piece which describes the plight of a new student at school. The title of the poem is lucid and ...
Feb 23, 2020 -
Re: Listen
Heya, this is sree :) just letting you know that this poem just talked to me. I listened and enjoyed each and every line Wow! It was a pleasure reading ...
Jul 13, 2019 -
Re: How to Write a Novel, 101
LOL! This one is hilarious. I enjoyed the read. My eyes were glued till the end of the poem. BAM! I loved the way you ended it. Made me blurt ...
Jan 22, 2019 -
Re: Bird with no wings
Hi, justlittleoleme2! My understanding: Reading this poem made me feel 'Human' We are born with amazing talents; Some are born with visibly actual wings and they know how to fly. ...
Jan 14, 2019 -
Re: King Of Avians
Hey, Eros! Thanks for sharing an amazing work. The picture is so apt for the poem. The poem itself speaks for the eagle's majesty which is pretty obvious in the ...
Oct 25, 2018 -
Re: Saving The Innocents || 2
Hey, Dear Eros! I feel connected to this novel. It was a pleasant read to me. The characters are of full life. I love how you give every bit of ...
Sep 12, 2018 -
Re: Saving The Innocents || 1
Hey, Eros! I enjoyed this chapter. His mother held his ear playfully and asked him to quit the game. "Mom---mom I am just going to win!!" "No is a no." ...
Sep 9, 2018 -
Re: Life or Death
WOW! Amazing!!! You should add this poem in your novel. I absolutely loved it! The lines were brilliant. Wings of gold soar through the sky Wing as black as night ...
Sep 9, 2018 -
Re: The Last Nightmare ...
Hey, Eros! First of all, your poem is of perfect length, that showed the strong flow of your thoughts. The dictions were great. I could totally relate to the theme ...
Sep 4, 2018 -
Re: Falling Rain
Heya,Shikora! This is a beautiful poem. The words just painted a pleasant picture in my head. There’s nothing like The sound of falling rain. Oh, yeah! This very line gets ...
Sep 3, 2018
