Young Writers Society

Hey, Pal!
This is poem is magnificent in its way.
The rhyme scheme didn't seem to be forced. It was smooth and paved for an amazing read.
The reader could feel the emotions of the poet here, for the voice of the poem was so geniune and gentle.

I felt the lines are filled with full of love. The last line was intense. Heart touching poem.
Glad that I stumbled upon this one.

hey! chitz here for a review after long.

starting from the start , i want to say, reading this made me sad. its just heart breaking to think of your loved one moving on without you, and this seems the same.

i really like reading short poetry, so this is my stuff. i just tell you that punctuation and grammar is really not my thing. i just better focus on the words and the flow and sometimes rhyme.

your piece, quite nicely describes the possible ways with which one might can get heart. but as you wrote it, making it clear that its all human tendencies and you are sorry for everything which matters the most. so cheers to this. now i would like to say that , i would have preferred every lines starting as 'I am sorry' , 'And I am sorry'. like:

i am sorry for sometimes losing my cool
i am sorry for sometimes acting like a fool

it is just a simple suggestion, not something to take on your heart. Its completely your work and your wish how you want to present it.

rest everything is good for me, i really enjoyed reading it. and sorry for talking about other stuff as well, i just can't control. but lastly adding, you posted this piece on my birthday

hope to read more of you soon

keep writing.

**My Thoughts**

Hey vagrant! LZ here with a review. I liked this poem. It was short, yet you were able to say everything you needed to say.

**Formatting and Grammar**

I liked how short the stanzas are. The two lines in each make it a really simple poem. As I said before, you put all the detail in this poem well! It didn't seem too short, it seemed just perfect.
As for grammar, I didn't catch anything!

**Punctuation and Capitalization**

In this poem, you used full punctuation! I appreciate that! I like poems that have full punctuation, it makes them look more complete. I also like how you capitalized every first letter in the lines.

**Quick Review**

Awesome poem! I loved it!

Keep on writing, I enjoyed this poem. Have a great Sunday!

Hi @vagrant I am here to do a quick review on your poem, so lets get right into it shell we.
So I think that the name to this poem is really real and true it goes with the poem its self.

I'm sorry if I ever came off as too strong.