Young Writers Society

This is my first song. I have a composition in mind but I have neither the resources nor the talent to actually record it. Hopefully, sometime in the future, I will create the song but till then, here are the lyrics. Please do let me know if you have any suggestions. Thanks.

VERSE1
I had a dream and I saw you die
while I just stood there, hoping it was all a lie.
Just like that, you were gone
and I couldn't help but cry.

I sprung up off my bed.
I was shaking my head
and got out in search of you.

It was early morning six.
You were packing your things
'cause last night, I asked you to.

PRE-CHORUS
All I want to do is to pray
that my dream never comes true.
'cause it scares me to know
that I could lose you.

CHORUS1
So tell me,
Is it okay if I want to hold your hand?
Is it okay if I want to kiss you on your neck?
Is it okay if I want to take you back to bed?
Is it okay? Is it okay?

Is it okay if I want to cancel your cab?
Is it okay if I don't want you to go back?
Is it okay if I want to forgive you?
Is it okay? Is it okay?

VERSE2
Let's be with one another while we still have time.
Let's just forget we ever had a fight.
Oh, what's the rush?
Just stay here one more night.

I know you kissed him
but does he love you 
as I do?

I know you hate me
but do you really
have to?

PRE-CHORUS
All I want to do is to pray
that my dream never comes true.
'cause it scares me to know
that I could lose you.

CHORUS1
So tell me,
Is it okay if I want to hold your hand?
Is it okay if I want to kiss you on your neck?
Is it okay if I want to take you back to bed?
Is it okay? Is it okay?

Is it okay if I want to cancel your cab?
Is it okay if I don't want you to go back?
Is it okay if I want to forgive you?
Is it okay? Is it okay?

BRIDGE
If you had a dream, and you watched me die
would you still hate me or would it make you cry?
would you shed a tear
or would you just walk by?

I know you don't love me anymore,
but oh please, just don't leave my door.

I know that life one day has to end,
but would it hurt you to stay here just one more second?

PRE-CHORUS
All I want to do is to pray
that my dream never comes true.
'cause it scares me to know
that I could lose you.

CHORUS2
So tell me,

Is it okay if I want to look at your face?
Is it okay if I want to touch your skin?
Is it okay if I want you back?
Is it okay? Is it okay?

Is it okay if I want to hold your hand?
Is it okay if I want to kiss you on your neck?
Is it okay if I want to take you back to bed?
Is it okay? Is it okay?

Is it okay if I want to cancel your cab?
Is it okay if I don't want you to go back?
Is it okay if I want to forgive you?
Is it okay? Is it okay?

OUTRO
Oh, would it hurt you to stay one more night?

Let's be with one another while we still have time.