Winter257

Hey there, care for a review? :D I really loved this poem! It's simplistic nature, yet deeper meaning was what made it so enjoyable to read. I've always loved short ...

Hey there, gonna leave you with a brief review! So, overall, your poem has a great message. It's true, societal expectations are very unrealistic, and practically destroy people's self-esteems. Bullyi

Hey there! Gonna leave you a review. :D So, overall, I enjoyed your use of descriptive words within this story. I felt like I could feel Paul's fear. The twist ...

Hello, gonna leave your story a review. :D I really like your story so far! Though, I do have a few suggestions, and they are as follows... 1. "On a ...

Hey there! I decided to give you a well-deserved review for this story. :D Okay, firstly, I need to applaud your use of wording and description within this. The way ...

Okay, I firstly would like to applaud how wonderfully written this story is. Not only is it covering a sensitive topic, but it captures the emotions behind this topic with ...

Hey there! Gonna leave you with a review quickly. :D So, the first thing that stuck out was the short and simple nature of this poem. When constructing poetry in ...

Hello, there. I figured I'd leave you a review seeing as this peice has been in the green room for awhile. Okay, my first and most important suggestion to you, ...

Hey SkyisDead! Gonna review this for you c: When I first saw the title, and your name, I was expecting something of a poetic autobiography or somthing. But I was ...

Hey there! This peice seems to be really popular already, so I decided I'd give it a review quickly :D So, out of the few of these that I read, ...

Hey there. Decided to leave you a review! c: So, firstly, I found this quite amusing! In a weird way, the pacing and short worded lines just added to this ...

I really love the idea behind this. It's true, the men and women who fight in our military tend to go un-appreciated. Seeing as my family has a long history ...

Okay, per your suggestion I decided to read this. And I was so pleasantly surprised! I thought this was adorable. It seriously took me back to when I was younger ...

Wow. Firstly, the title is what grabbed my attention. Love truly is war, isn't it? xD Okay, onto my review.... So, I rather enjoyed this poem. It emphasizes your metaphor, ...

Hey there, gonna leave you a brief review. c: I really enjoyed reading this poem. It's quite relatable. Most teens who weren't exactly popular could probably relate to the feelings ...