WillowPaw1

Hello, Willow here to give you another review! I'm going to point out little things first. When my first heartbreak came Is when I discovered that love can be war ...

Hi there! I don't review many things in the "other" section, but I can try. ;) I have one nitpick for you: I hear 1,00 tiny voices squealing. If you ...

Hi there! To answer your author's note question: Yes, I would read it. I like the idea. Mostly, because it's teen fiction, which I love, and because I've never read ...

Hi there. Me again. Nitpicks We are all still stuck out here and its been over a week. Hard to process. I would suggest changing it to: We were all ...

Hey Raven! I'll do nitpicks first, like usual. She felt a felt a little bit peeved, Rease had been in the middle of a great dream about her father and ...

Kay, first of all, I really don't see how this title relates to this piece...? Did you just write the date? Second: Give this a genre! You say other, general, ...

Hi there! Okay, first off -- you might wanna change the genre of this. Right now its Dramatic & Other. I suggest changing the other to realistic. Second -- nitpicks. ...

Haiiii! Quick Nitpicks The ducts were cold, breezy, dusty and small. The ducts were rectangular. These are both the starting of the first two paragraphs. They both start with "the ...

Hi! Me again. Nitpicks All my corrections are in red . "Hey Katie?" I said . "Yeah?" "Don't you think we should invite Sarah and Grace to F antasy L ...

Hi dogs! Okay~ so another review from me. I'm going to split the review into 3 pieces, one for each paragraph. Paragraph #1 I figured that if this was Fantasy ...

Hey dogsrule5! Nitpicks "Yeah I said." Watch where you put your quotation marks. ;) " I need to see this!" Add in the red quotation mark. Okay, so, I found ...

Hi there! I found one mistake: It tells of every night I’ve lain awake, I'm pretty sure you meant "laid", not "lain". Other than that, grammar, punctuation, and spelling seemed ...

Hi Em! (This is on my kindle fire, so no hate if I mess this up) I love the connection with weather and just three simple words: I hate you. ...

Hi Em! :) Me again. Nitpicks Vivid feelings screaming in her head, mingling together. The comma should be a semicolon. Angelina slammed her fist on the End button for a ...

Hi Em. :) Wrote this when you were younger, huh? Well I like it. It's so easy to relate to. Almost everyone hates school, despite the fact that you make ...