3x the Girls

by Storyandwriter678

Published May 10, 2014

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3 sisters, Triplets. Blonde, brunette and redhead. Normal girls trying to live their lives to the fullest. But an unexpected bump will come to the road.

  • Meet Jasmine the oldest of the group of girls. Lover of animals and the sportiest one of all, you would of never knew she was only 5'3. 18 years old and a daddy's girl you would of never known she had a major 'family' problem.
  • Now meet the middle child, Natalie. Fashion lover. Natalie likes to sew, and also has a long lost dream of owning her own clothing store. But what makes her different from the other girls is that she's a big fashionista. Sometimes her sisters even call her the Queen of Fashion.
  • The baby of the family is Brenda. Brenda loves to draw. Nature addict and the weirdest one of all you would of never known she was a peacemaker, hater of violence when you first lay eyes on her.




A/N: (AUTHORS NOTE)

So this is a story I wanted to start . Tell me if you would read it and what you think of it so far or if your even interested in reading it. Thank you


Comments & reviews · 4
budding writer wrote a review Review · May 25, 2014

Hey!
Well let me tell you I'm a total sucker for these types of books specially involving twins or triplets. And if you want to go ahead with your idea then thats great. I would be more than willing to read it and give you reviews. I like the character sketches that you have mentioned. You can go quite far with that. Specially if you have your chapters carefully planned you can always include a lot of stuff which would make it really interesting.

Please do go ahead with it and post the first chapter!

-Budding writer

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faithless0408
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faithless0408 wrote a review Review · May 20, 2014

Hey!
I'm always one for triplets, though I am usually more interested in those who are identical, just because they are so rare! But anyway, I like your idea better than identical triplets, the fact that you have these clear ideas about how very different each sister is, in both their personalities and appearances shows you have really thought about your idea in detail, something vital for a good story/novel.
I do, overall, like the idea a lot. I've found myself getting more and more into teen fictions and I always like the way different authors choose to portray sisters and their varying, complex relationships. I feel that this would be even more engaging within your story as there is more of them, so close in age and proximity but so opposite in everything else. The dynamic between each of them and the relationships they have with other people would be very interesting to read and follow.
I would want to know a bit more about the plot idea before I say, "go ahead , write it it'll be amazing!" That's just not me, I basically want to know what happens in a book before I read it, mainly so I have an idea of what it'll be like and the issues it will discuss. But yeah, if you have clear ideas and visions for where you want to take this story then I would advise you think a lot about what you want to happen exactly and draft out a few ideas for plots and timescales and then start writing!
Good luck, I really hope that this works out for you!
Faithless.
P.S. I do apologise but I wrote this on my phone which tends to autocorrect peculiar things so if something doesn't make sense, that's why!

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Noelle
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Noelle commented Comment · May 10, 2014

Hi there!

So you've got a novel idea, huh? That's awesome!

I just stopped by to let you know that there is a forum in resources called Writers Corner. There you can share your novel ideas and ask for advice or help if you need. Then once you've written the first chapter or your prologue, then post so you can get reviews!

Good luck with your novel!

Keep writing!
**Noelle**

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WillowPaw1
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WillowPaw1 wrote a review Review · May 10, 2014

Hi there!

To answer your author's note question:
Yes, I would read it. I like the idea. Mostly, because it's teen fiction, which I love, and because I've never read anything with triplets. My friend is a triplet, so I kind of know what it's like, but reading this would be cool.

I like the description of the girls. Personally, though, if you plan on writing a story about this, I suggest not using this as an introduction or prologue. Introduce their hobbies and tell what they like later on as your progress through the story.

Also, I really don't see how one can have blonde hair, one have brown, and one red? It really just doesn't seem realistic. I guess it could happen, I don't know.

Yes, I would like to see a story like this. Fiction is my favorite genre to read. ^_^

If you do start writing something like this, please tell me!

WillowPaw1~



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