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Re: Why Can't I Let go.
Hi! This is really realistic to how break ups go. My favorite quote was, "But your heart was a locked door, And I never found the key.." it is full ...
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Re: Acceptance.
Hi! This is an amazing poem. It flows so perfectly. Delusion is a hard thing to deal with especially if you had a past with the person. Delusion can fit ...
Apr 10 -
Re: A poem I wrote for my Lolo <3
Hi! Walker here! You are my first review in a while so hopefully this goes well. My condolences to you and your family. Cancer is a heart breaking disease, your ...
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Re: Cleaning Hearts
Hi Que! I want to start off by saying I do this! Whenever I am anxious or when something is out of my control I clean so much. So I ...
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Re: My Dad's Funeral
This story is spectacular. The caption hooked me into reading. The emotions were written so well! The line that sticks with me is, "But I stood there quietly. No tears. ...
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Re: he writes me poetry in rose petals
This caught my eye and I am so happy it did. It is easy to understand and it flows together perfectly! I love all the details in this piece! When ...
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Re: Dear Universe
This is beautiful. I don't have any critiques but I do want to compliment your writing. I feel it when you say, "I love the way you made my favorite ...
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Re: i am a woman
Hi! I am a woman and I related to this. Where I am from women are treated more like objects than people. The realization that every girl you pass on ...
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Re: What if I never fell for you?
Hi! This is an emotional poem that I can relate to. You did a spectacular job of writing this. The emotions bled through the pages and it shows the pain ...
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Re: My Body Whole
This is an amazing explanation of aggressive love. The poem is spectacular! It shows a person who is obsessed over their partner (not a bad thing). I kind of relate ...
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Re: Happy.
Happiness is used so loosely that it has different meanings to other people. Although the feeling of happiness is so hard to come by. The feeling is what so many ...
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Re: Poem title: Unfinished
As I read this I think back to my unfinished story that I put all my effort into and now I'm thinking if I should finish it? I never thought ...
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Re: paranoia paranoia paranoia
This poem was my life until I found the person who showed me my worth. The pain and thoughts when you go through this is awful. I could never describe ...
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Re: honey, you're more broken than i can fix
Do not make me cry during my classes. This is beautiful. I felt so emotional reading this. Your descriptions are amazing. I try not to use the word perfect when ...
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Re: Wilted Flowers of Spring
This is an excellent poem. It is very powerful and each sentence hits harder than the last. The whole poem flows and it shows a purpose. I can feel the ...
Mar 4, 2025
