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Walker34

  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Why Can't I Let go.

    Hi! This is really realistic to how break ups go. My favorite quote was, "But your heart was a locked door, And I never found the key.." it is full ...

    Apr 10
  • Poetry » Realistic, Fantasy Re: Acceptance.

    Hi! This is an amazing poem. It flows so perfectly. Delusion is a hard thing to deal with especially if you had a past with the person. Delusion can fit ...

    Apr 10
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: A poem I wrote for my Lolo <3

    Hi! Walker here! You are my first review in a while so hopefully this goes well. My condolences to you and your family. Cancer is a heart breaking disease, your ...

    Sep 11, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Cleaning Hearts

    Hi Que! I want to start off by saying I do this! Whenever I am anxious or when something is out of my control I clean so much. So I ...

    Mar 6, 2025
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: My Dad's Funeral

    This story is spectacular. The caption hooked me into reading. The emotions were written so well! The line that sticks with me is, "But I stood there quietly. No tears. ...

    Mar 5, 2025
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: he writes me poetry in rose petals

    This caught my eye and I am so happy it did. It is easy to understand and it flows together perfectly! I love all the details in this piece! When ...

    Mar 4, 2025
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: Dear Universe

    This is beautiful. I don't have any critiques but I do want to compliment your writing. I feel it when you say, "I love the way you made my favorite ...

    Mar 4, 2025
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: i am a woman

    Hi! I am a woman and I related to this. Where I am from women are treated more like objects than people. The realization that every girl you pass on ...

    Mar 4, 2025
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: What if I never fell for you?

    Hi! This is an emotional poem that I can relate to. You did a spectacular job of writing this. The emotions bled through the pages and it shows the pain ...

    Mar 4, 2025
  • Poetry » Horror, Romantic Re: My Body Whole

    This is an amazing explanation of aggressive love. The poem is spectacular! It shows a person who is obsessed over their partner (not a bad thing). I kind of relate ...

    Mar 4, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Happy.

    Happiness is used so loosely that it has different meanings to other people. Although the feeling of happiness is so hard to come by. The feeling is what so many ...

    Mar 4, 2025
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Poem title: Unfinished

    As I read this I think back to my unfinished story that I put all my effort into and now I'm thinking if I should finish it? I never thought ...

    Mar 4, 2025
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: paranoia paranoia paranoia

    This poem was my life until I found the person who showed me my worth. The pain and thoughts when you go through this is awful. I could never describe ...

    Mar 4, 2025
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: honey, you're more broken than i can fix

    Do not make me cry during my classes. This is beautiful. I felt so emotional reading this. Your descriptions are amazing. I try not to use the word perfect when ...

    Mar 4, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Wilted Flowers of Spring

    This is an excellent poem. It is very powerful and each sentence hits harder than the last. The whole poem flows and it shows a purpose. I can feel the ...

    Mar 4, 2025


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